Johnathan Patin-Sauls
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Johnathan Patin-Sauls
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About

As a former professor (psychology, world literatures, writing programs, film & media studies), admissions officer, and international secondary school director Professor Jake has advised thousands of students through every aspect of the academic process. He then perfected the process of helping people find their unique voice and most powerful stories as a political ghostwriter, writing workshop leader, and literary journal editor. He works full time as an educational consultant for an international organization that supports students preparing for highly competitive college admissions beginning in the 8th grade and going all the way through graduate school. In addition to college applications he also mentors independent research and writing projects, advises competitive secondary school and summer program essays and applications.

Professor Jake's "Common App Brainstorming Session" has been studied by researchers at Cornell University and is the foundation for an upcoming book on succ...

Johnathan helped students get into:
Sacred Heart UniversitySaint Louis University
Saint Mary's College of CaliforniaSam Houston State University
San Diego State UniversitySan Francisco Conservatory of Music
San Francisco State UniversitySan Jose State University
Sacred Heart University
Saint Louis University
Saint Mary's College of California
Sam Houston State University
San Diego State University
San Francisco Conservatory of Music
San Francisco State University
San Jose State University
Johnathan helps with…
Majors & Careers
Extracurriculars
Building a School List
Transfers
College Interviews
Community College
UC Schools
Common App
Trade School & Vocational Pathways
FAFSA
Highly Selective College Admissions
High School Course Selection
College Applications & Essays
Admissions Timeline
School-Specific Supplemental Essays
Texas and Prague
10 years of experience
HECA
Psychology
Architecture
Creative Writing
International Students
LGBTQ+ students
Next available sessions
According to your time zone (CUT)
Fun Facts
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Describe yourself in five words
organized, loyal, concerned, chill, bad at math

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Best piece of advice
Writing consists of brainstorming, evaluation, & revision. The rough draft is an act of brainstorming evaluated for revision or a "restart."

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First job
Teacher's Aide

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Dream job
I'm doing it!

📚
Favorite book
Don Quixote

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Favorite subject in school
Literature

Favorite after-school activities
When I was a kid that would have been boxed mac 'n cheese and Nickelodeon

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Favorite artist
The Beatles

📺
Favorite TV show
Mad Men

🍴
Favorite food
Carbs of all textures and flavor

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Hobbies
Travel, running, reading

My process

Each of my essay students is provided with a Google Doc copy of my admissions workbook that includes a personalized timeline, essay lessons, resources and organizers, FAQs, and more information about applying successfully to highly selective schools. The workbook provides the framework for our meetings, with assigned work to be completed in between so they stay organized, on track, and we're never wasting time "on the clock." It's updated twice yearly and reviewed and revised by current admissions officers at Yale, Princeton, UNC- Chapel Hill, and UC Berkeley.

Package students also receive a pdf of my favorite 200+ successful personal statements and supplementary essays completed by students who've given me permission to share, often alongside early drafts and my own written commentary.

Already have a draft completed? Send it in for review! Grammar and other sentence-level revisions made inline, with tips, tricks, suggestions, thoughts, stories, and suggestions for further reflection left in comments! In addition I'll provide a write-up with my overall impression, rationale, and suggestions for next steps. Leave any questions in the "notes" box and I'll answer those, as well! It's also useful if you let me know what you think you're doing well, where you feel like you've struggled to be clear or effective, and any extra details that will help me evaluate the essay with your specific needs in mind.

Packages

The Personal Essay: From Start to Finish

12 hours

SALE: Half off for a limited time! Forget the formulas and fad advice for crafting a stellar personal essay. Admissions officers really want something that’s going to make them sit up amongst the ceiling-high stacks of applications and set their coffee down for a closer read. Using my system even the most reluctant writers will walk away with an essay that tells a great story in their own voice and will get universities excited to say yes. (Student homework must be completed in full. Package includes four live sessions and two asynchronous sessions. Package length includes a minimum of six hours live & six hours of asynchronous reading, research, revision, and response.)
$1,200($100/hr)
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A Complete Introduction to the Admissions Process

14 hours

25% off. 14+ hours total. Appropriate for students and/or parents. In addition to answering all of your specific questions, our meetings will cover the following topics in the context of your particular goals, needs, and values:- Choosing a major.- Building your school list, parts 1 & 2.- Building the senior year schedule. - Resume/extracurricular review and analysis. - Acing your interviews.- Setting yourself apart from the competition.- How to secure the best letters of recommendation (and why that's important).- Summer planning, parts 1 & 2.- Paying for College.-Finding the right volunteer position, research opportunity, internship, or summer job to boost your resume.- Introduction to writing the personal essay.
$2,100($150/hr)
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Essays: Complete

22 hours

SALE: 25% off! Let's work together to ensure that all of your essays end up pitch perfect. We'll work step-by-step through all of your essays, including Common App, Coalition, UC Schools, non-affiliated schools, and all supplementary essays.(Student homework must be completed in full. Package includes seven live sessions and four asynchronous sessions. Package length includes unlimited email-based advising and a minimum of eleven hours live & eleven hours of asynchronous reading, research, and revision).
$3,300($150/hr)
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Essays: Revised

29 hours

60% off! Already completed the brainstorming and drafting process and just need someone to make sure your essays are telling your story to its maximum effect? This is the package for you. Sign up now to receive three live workshops and unlimited revisions of your essay drafts for up 12 schools. (Student homework must be completed in full. Package length includes unlimited email-based advising and a minimum of four hours live & twenty-four hours of asynchronous revision.)
$2,500($86/hr)
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Essays: Unlimited

43 hours

SALE: 25% off! We'll brainstorm, revise, and live workshop all of your essays, including Common App, Coalition, UC Schools, non-affiliated schools, and all supplementary essays.(Student homework must be completed in full. Package includes thirteen live sessions and fourteen asynchronous sessions. Package length includes unlimited email-based advising and a minimum of 19 hours live & 24 hours of asynchronous reading, research, and revision). ALSO: Unlimited essay review/revision!
$4,945($115/hr)
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The Total (Application) Package

60 hours

SALE: Half off for a limited time! Includes everything in the "Intro to the Admissions Process" & "Essays: Complete" packages PLUS: We'll work together to build you the perfect school list, choose the perfect major, and I'll assist with any extra application requirements like letters of recommendation, portfolios, resume-building, and more.(Student homework must be completed in full. Package includes twenty-two live sessions and eight asynchronous sessions. Package length includes unlimited email-based advising and a minimum of thirty hours live & thirty hours of asynchronous reading, research, and revision).
$6,000($100/hr)
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The Ultimate Unlimited

200 hours

SALE: 75% off for a limited time!!!! Get everything in the "Total Package" plus monthly mentorship meetings to keep you on track in school and your extracurriculars. Summer volunteer/internship placement. Special project support (thinking about creating a nonprofit, website, app, performing research, or publishing a book or article?). Unlimited asynchronous meetings and email support. Access to complete college-prep digital and video libraries. Interview, waitlist, and deferral support. ALSO: Unlimited essay review!
$10,000($50/hr)
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Advising hours

College admissions advising

$200.00 / 60 min

Set a focus for each session or get help with any aspect of the admissions process.


Consultation: Package, session, or essay review?

$50.00 / 45 min

I'll describe my process & explain your options. Full price refunded on first session or package purchase!


THE Common App Brainstorming Session--Discounted!

$400.00 / 120 min

The #1 bestseller. Completely prepares you to begin a rough draft! 2+hrs live & 2+hrs asynchronous.

Essay review

Full Review

$90.00 + 18 cents per word
Return time
  • Standard delivery: up to 48 hours
  • Guaranteed fast delivery: get your essay back in as little as: 3 hours +$100.00

Description

For First Time Customers: A comprehensive review of your essay draft. This may include first, second, and third read-through comments, sample essays to study, asynchronous conferencing, a full revision plan, structural revamping, a sample revision based on my suggestions, and a copy-edit/polish. I recommend submitting your personal statement first, if possible, since that helps me understand and evaluate your supplements as admissions will.


Discounted for Previous Customers

$36.00 + 18 cents per word
Return time
  • Standard delivery: up to 48 hours
  • Guaranteed fast delivery: get your essay back in as little as: 3 hours +$100.00

Description

For students I've worked with in the past (whether on another review, as a package, or in a single session). Thanks for coming back! I'm looking forward to reading your new piece!

Recent reviews

5.0(82 reviews)

“Great feedback and absolutely helpful!"

Liz E.

“Professor Jake does and outstanding job helping me shape my essays into my best writing. I feel so much more confident after his feedback. Thank you!"

Samantha A.

“Professor Jake has a true gift - he can propose a few subtle changes or rearrange sentences which then bring the essay to life. "

Marsha A.
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Any questions? Let’s hop on a quick call to learn more about your needs in the admissions process and how I can approach them
Join a quick meeting
Let’s chat
Any questions? Let’s hop on a quick call to learn more about your needs in the admissions process and how I can approach them
Texas and Prague
10 years of experience
HECA
Psychology
Architecture
Creative Writing
International Students
LGBTQ+ students
Next available sessions
According to your time zone (CUT)
Fun Facts
🖐
Describe yourself in five words
organized, loyal, concerned, chill, bad at math

🙏
Best piece of advice
Writing consists of brainstorming, evaluation, & revision. The rough draft is an act of brainstorming evaluated for revision or a "restart."

💼
First job
Teacher's Aide

💭
Dream job
I'm doing it!

📚
Favorite book
Don Quixote

📓
Favorite subject in school
Literature

Favorite after-school activities
When I was a kid that would have been boxed mac 'n cheese and Nickelodeon

🎵
Favorite artist
The Beatles

📺
Favorite TV show
Mad Men

🍴
Favorite food
Carbs of all textures and flavor

🪄
Hobbies
Travel, running, reading
Tips for success
1. Prepare for your first session
Plan out the questions and topics you'd like to discuss. If you'd like to work together in the long term, discuss expectations for each other.