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@DiamondApple
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 • 27 days ago •
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How to start personal statement for Oxford summer course?
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So I applied for the Oxford summer course, in business and administration, and it seems like my application is under consideration. They have emailed me back and stated that they want my personal statement which includes:

1. What would make me a good student at Oxford Summer Courses?

2. Why would I like to study with them?

3. Any experience that I’ve had in the subject previously?

Well, though I know what points to include and tell all the qualities I have and my experience, but I don't really know how to give it a really good and engaging start. I really want to give them a good first impression. Any ideas on how to start off the statement?

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@lonlon16
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 • 18 days ago

Hey! This seems like an awesome opportunity!

So for the first question, I would incorporate your grades and what drew you into the school in the first place.

The second question is really straightforward.

Then, add any experience, so whether you have your own business or need help managing one, take a class at school.

When asked these questions, most schools want to know more about you. Be passionate in the answer you give them, but also show them you have the qualities to take the course.

Good luck!

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[🎤 AUTHOR]@DiamondApple17 days ago

Well, I did send in my personal statement way earlier and did got accepted for that, however I won't be able to join the course due to financial issues.

@lonlon1616 days ago [edited]

That really sucks! Are there any free courses or cheaper courses they have? Remember, don't let this discourage you. Keep looking and take courses on other sites. It might not give you credit, but it shows that you took the time to learn more about your interest. For example, I'm taking Psychology on Modern States, because if I can tap into the human mind, then I can learn how it affects the way people view animals ( I want to go to college for Animal Sciences). Good luck!

[🎤 AUTHOR]@DiamondApple16 days ago

I think I need to research a lot in internships and coueses. I don't know about any free courses or internships yet and I'm interested in business, administration and economics.

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