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Christopher Kilner
4.9Christopher Kilner
4.9
Christopher is one of the most accomplished college students of the past decade, winning multiple international accolades: Mitchell Scholar, Goldwater Scholar, Rhodes Scholar Finalist, and Marshall Scholar Finalist. He has worked with over 80 students over the past 5 years as an advisor. Over just the past 3 years, Christopher's clients have earned over $1.5 Million in scholarships to schools such as Carnegie Mellon, Princeton, Duke, Fordham, and University of Scranton.
While Christopher is honored to have received his many titles and accolades, the college experience was so much more and this is why he wants to help all students achieve their potential at their dream school! As a triple major who went to undergrad at a smaller school on a scholarship, then lived in Ireland while attending Trinity College, and now pursues a PhD at Duke University, Christopher has experience at schools ranging from the small to the big, the close-knit to the prestigious. As an international fellow, Christopher has vast experience in interview preparation and essay writing; as an advisor and application reader to these competitive fellowships, he has a keen eye on how to find the narrative in an applicants story!
While Christopher is honored to have received his many titles and accolades, the college experience was so much more and this is why he wants to help all students achieve their potential at their dream school! As a triple major who went to undergrad at a smaller school on a scholarship, then lived in Ireland while attending Trinity College, and now pursues a PhD at Duke University, Christopher has experience at schools ranging from the small to the big, the close-knit to the prestigious. As an international fellow, Christopher has vast experience in interview preparation and essay writing; as an advisor and application reader to these competitive fellowships, he has a keen eye on how to find the narrative in an applicants story!
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Full Review | $25 + 20 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$155.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Daniel Berkowitz
5.0Daniel Berkowitz
5.0
PhD in theoretical physics from Yale and lover of philosophy offering comprehensive college consulting services that will make you stand out in the best possible way from the glut of applicants whose essays are filled with empty platitudes, tautologies, and truisms.
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Admissions Essay Editing Services | $40 + 20 cents per word
I will distill the kernel of wisdom you seek to convey in your essay in a manner that will be clear to the reader, and provide helpful suggestions to augment its profundity.
Specialties
College essays
$170.00
(Admissions Essay Editing Services | 650 words)
Samara Watkins
4.9Samara Watkins
4.9
Samara has spent seven admissions cycles helping students best represent themselves as both individuals and applicants in the elite college admissions process. As an alumna of Cornell University and child of 2 Harvard alumni interviewers, Samara is familiar with the Ivy League's rigorous academics and application process. Using her academic foundation in communication and Fortune 100 PR and brand management experience, Samara collaborates with her clients to craft narratives that best represent themselves to admissions committees. The wit, candor, and strategy Samara brings to collaborating with clients has been highly effective. Her clients have gained admission to Columbia, The University of Pennsylvania, Cornell, UC Berkley, NYU, and Boston University, among others. She looks forward to adding your student’s successful admission to this impressive list!
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Full Review | $30 + 18 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$147.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Veronica Prout
5.0Veronica Prout
5.0
As a paid writing tutor for her peers in both high school and college, Ms. Veronica Prout graduated with distinction from UCLA in 2010 with a B.A. in Philosophy and a minor in Chicana and Chicano Studies. Ms. Prout started her own education consultancy called MeiguoEdu, which means "American Education" in Mandarin, after teaching U.S. high school English and seeing the unmet needs of international and local students. Through MeiguoEdu, Ms. Prout has advised 500+ students from across the United States and has traveled to 15+ cities in China, visiting families and helping their children see the worth in building their abilities for their futures. Ms. Prout also spent a year teaching English at the Beijing Royal School in Beijing, China and has learned from brilliant children and their families how to be successful in the 21st century. Thanks to CollegeVine, Ms. Prout is now delivering her elite services to every day Americans and people around the world.
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Top 100 University Edit | $55 + 5 cents per word
I am an essay cutting master! With 20 years of editing experience and a reputation for comprehensive and encouraging commentary, I will edit your Personal Statement down to the most impressive parts and help ensure your essay has an impactful and emotional flow. Let's elevate together!
Specialties
College essays
$87.50
(Top 100 University Edit | 650 words)
Jake Patin-Sauls
5.0Jake Patin-Sauls
5.0
NOTE: This is going up top because I'm seeing more and more reports of it, but please, PLEASE, for the sake of everything that is good in this world, do not trust ANYONE who insinuates that you must have had hardships, some dramatic experience, or a "spike"/"passion" in order to write a successful Common App essay/get into your dream school. These ideas stem from a fundamental misunderstanding of what makes a compelling story and what admissions officers are looking for. They *can* make great essays, but advisors relying on them are FAR more likely to give AI-created, recycled, or flat-out plagiarised advice/revisions.
Every year this gets many students eliminated from schools that would have otherwise accepted them. This fact is then often reported to OTHER universities, who may also choose to decline or rescind acceptance. And you may never even know it happened.
LISTEN IN ON A LIVE CONSULTATION HERE: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd_z1kC_cirFXTFRHsHM9ZjhSbMUMpgMy
BIO: One of the only educational consultants in the world with over two decades of experience as an editor, ghostwriter, and university professor, Johnathan (better known as Professor Jake) has guided thousands of students through every aspect of the academic process. He has perfected the process of helping people find their unique voice and most powerful stories. When not on CollegeVine, he is the Director of Admissions, College, and Careers Department at hippocampusacademy.us . As part of this role, he also mentors independent research, creative writing, publishing, and "passion" projects.
BOOKS: New book coming out August 30, 23! https://amzn.to/3BXaZCT
NEWSLETTER: highreach.substack.com
*Profile portrait drawn by Anna Xu, 2023. Thanks Anna! Have fun at Yale!*
Every year this gets many students eliminated from schools that would have otherwise accepted them. This fact is then often reported to OTHER universities, who may also choose to decline or rescind acceptance. And you may never even know it happened.
LISTEN IN ON A LIVE CONSULTATION HERE: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd_z1kC_cirFXTFRHsHM9ZjhSbMUMpgMy
BIO: One of the only educational consultants in the world with over two decades of experience as an editor, ghostwriter, and university professor, Johnathan (better known as Professor Jake) has guided thousands of students through every aspect of the academic process. He has perfected the process of helping people find their unique voice and most powerful stories. When not on CollegeVine, he is the Director of Admissions, College, and Careers Department at hippocampusacademy.us . As part of this role, he also mentors independent research, creative writing, publishing, and "passion" projects.
BOOKS: New book coming out August 30, 23! https://amzn.to/3BXaZCT
NEWSLETTER: highreach.substack.com
*Profile portrait drawn by Anna Xu, 2023. Thanks Anna! Have fun at Yale!*
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Full Review: First Time customers--NOW 25% OFF! | $82 + 18 cents per word
For First Time Customers: Includes everything in the standard full review--on sale for a limited time!
Unlimited Revisions via Google Docs | $108 + 36 cents per word
For when you want to ensure we have extra time to get it just perfect.
Full Review | $108 + 18 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. This may include first, second, and third read-through commentary, sample essays to study, asynchronous conferencing, a full revision plan, structural revamping, a sample revision based on my suggestions, and a copy-edit/polish.
Specialties
College essays
$342.00
(Unlimited Revisions via Google Docs | 650 words)
Alexandra Johnson
4.9Alexandra Johnson
4.9
My name is Alex, and I would be thrilled to help you with the college application process! I graduated from Duke University with degrees in Public Policy and French and am now a law student at Wake Forest University. I have been working with students throughout the college application process for the last six years, and I love seeing students grow in their confidence and writing abilities! I'm originally from Raleigh, North Carolina, and I'm a huge college basketball fan. I even slept in a tent for a month with 11 other people to get into the Duke-UNC basketball game. Also, during college, I raised a puppy named Franco to become a service dog through Canine Companions for Independence. I would love to work with you to make your college applications process as easy and fun as possible!
I'm currently accepting new clients for the 2023-2024 application cycle.
I'm currently accepting new clients for the 2023-2024 application cycle.
Review options
Full Review | $20 + 8 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$72.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Shravya Kakulamarri
4.7Shravya Kakulamarri
4.7
Shravya is a Seattle native who attended Rice University and studied Health Sciences and Global Health Technologies. She is currently a third-year medical student at UT Southwestern in Dallas, Texas. During her time at Rice, she mentored dozens of high school students through the college application process, along with editing essays and tutoring students for the ACT/SAT. She absolutely loves building relationships with students and getting to know their story more personally to craft their narratives for college applications! Some fun facts about Shravya include that she interned at a medical technology startup, conducted research in Brazil, and gave a TEDx talk. In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball, doing hot yoga, skiing, and eating raw kale.
Review options
Full Review | $35 + 8 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$87.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Craig Aimar
4.5Craig Aimar
4.5
With over 20 years of higher education experience overseeing the offices of Admissions, Financial Aid, Retention, Student Success, Orientation and Academic Advising for Saginaw Valley State University and Alma College, Dr. Aimar brings an insiders perspective and knowledge to finding the right college and navigating the entire enrollment process. He has led all record-breaking enrollment efforts at a 4-year public university, and a 4-year selective private college. He has personally reviewed nearly 40,000 college applications and essays in his experience and offers fantastic guidance to help your application and essay to stand out! Dr. Aimar holds several university degrees including a Bachelor’s Degree in Secondary Education (B.A.), a Master’s Degree (M.A.) in Educational Leadership and an Education Specialist Degree (Ed.S.) in Athletic Directorship all from SVSU. He completed his Ph.D. at Eastern Michigan University focusing his research on entry level admissions representatives. As a first generation student, Dr. Aimar is passionate with assisting families in overcoming the challenges of higher education and finding the right college fit for all students! He also oversees his private admissions advising company, Michigan College Consulting and Advising LLC.
Review options
Full review | $30 + 12 cents per word
A comprehensive and complete review of your essay draft with suggested edits including grammatical review. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft with ideas for making the essay stand out! The essay review can be applied to college applications, scholarship applications, common app essays, direct program admissions, etc.
Specialties
College essays
$108.00
(Full review | 650 words)
Chinaza Ruth Okonkwo
Chinaza Ruth Okonkwo
Chinaza Ruth Okonkwo graduated Summa Cum Laude and Phi Beta Kappa from the University of Pennsylvania with a Bachelor of Arts in Philosophy with Distinction (Honors) and History and minors in Africana Studies and Gender, Sexuality, and Women's Studies. A Beinecke Scholar, Chinaza also graduated with a Master of Arts in Philosophy during her four years at Penn by sub-matriculating her junior year. As a Marshall Scholar, Chinaza will spend the next few years exploring and studying at the University of Cambridge and the University of Oxford. She has worked as an application processing assistant in the Carnegie Mellon University Admissions Department. She is eager to help all students with their goals of getting into colleges and universities across the United States and the United Kingdom.
Review options
Common App | $100 + 50 cents per word
I will read and edit your common app statement as well as provide conceptual suggestions based on your interests.
Supplemental Essays | $100 + 50 cents per word
I will read and edit your supplemental essays together (some schools offer 2 - 4 supplemental essays) and give necessary edits and comments.
Common App + Supplemental Essays | $170 + 50 cents per word
I will read and edit both your common app and supplemental essays together and leave substantive edits and comments.
Specialties
College essays
$495.00
(Common App + Supplemental Essays | 650 words)
Denise Karp
5.0Denise Karp
5.0
Hi! I became a college admissions consultant to help students like you navigate the current challenges and changes in college admissions. I know how busy you are and how stressful this process can be.
I graduated as a double major in psychology and Spanish from Union College and earned my M.Ed. from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. My early career in education as a school psychologist provided me the opportunity to coordinate and counsel high school students in their college and transition plans. I have experience working with students with ADHD and anxiety and understand the impact that it has not only on the student but the entire family. I have been a substitute teacher, volunteered in the schools, managed the tennis teams, and taught religious school. My students enjoy working with me and benefit from my knowledge and experience as an Associate Member of IECA. I also have two sons who I have helped through the college-admissions process in the past few years. I can't wait to help you next!
I graduated as a double major in psychology and Spanish from Union College and earned my M.Ed. from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. My early career in education as a school psychologist provided me the opportunity to coordinate and counsel high school students in their college and transition plans. I have experience working with students with ADHD and anxiety and understand the impact that it has not only on the student but the entire family. I have been a substitute teacher, volunteered in the schools, managed the tennis teams, and taught religious school. My students enjoy working with me and benefit from my knowledge and experience as an Associate Member of IECA. I also have two sons who I have helped through the college-admissions process in the past few years. I can't wait to help you next!
Review options
Full Review | $60 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$125.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Robbie Herbst
4.9Robbie Herbst
4.9
Hello! I am a writer, editor, and violinist, and for the past eight years I've coached students writing college essays.
In the 2022-2023 application cycle, my students received admission from Stanford, Columbia, Duke, Northwestern, UVA, Carnegie Mellon, Tufts, Bates, Vanderbilt, Case Western Reserve, and many others.
When I was in college (Dartmouth '16), I became interested in creative writing. During my time there, I won the student awards for best Short Story and Best Creative Work. I also founded the campus literary magazine. In the years since, my essays and fiction have been published in esteemed literary magazines including Gulf Coast, CRAFT Literary, and The Offing. A full list of my publications and awards can be found at my personal website, robbieherbst.com.
After graduating from Dartmouth, I channelled my passion for writing and editing into the world of admissions, and I began working with rising high school seniors in 2016. Since then, I've worked with all sorts of students including transfers, veterans, students applying for medical/graduate school, students taking gap years, as well as more traditional undergraduate applicants. The breadth of my writing experience has given me insights into the editorial process, and I know my students benefit from it.
In my parallel life, I am a violinist, and I play with a number of groups in and around the Chicago area, notably the Civic Orchestra of Chicago. I graduated from CU Boulder with my Masters of Music in 2019 and my Artist Diploma in 2021.
In the 2022-2023 application cycle, my students received admission from Stanford, Columbia, Duke, Northwestern, UVA, Carnegie Mellon, Tufts, Bates, Vanderbilt, Case Western Reserve, and many others.
When I was in college (Dartmouth '16), I became interested in creative writing. During my time there, I won the student awards for best Short Story and Best Creative Work. I also founded the campus literary magazine. In the years since, my essays and fiction have been published in esteemed literary magazines including Gulf Coast, CRAFT Literary, and The Offing. A full list of my publications and awards can be found at my personal website, robbieherbst.com.
After graduating from Dartmouth, I channelled my passion for writing and editing into the world of admissions, and I began working with rising high school seniors in 2016. Since then, I've worked with all sorts of students including transfers, veterans, students applying for medical/graduate school, students taking gap years, as well as more traditional undergraduate applicants. The breadth of my writing experience has given me insights into the editorial process, and I know my students benefit from it.
In my parallel life, I am a violinist, and I play with a number of groups in and around the Chicago area, notably the Civic Orchestra of Chicago. I graduated from CU Boulder with my Masters of Music in 2019 and my Artist Diploma in 2021.
Review options
Second Draft Essays | $20 + 10 cents per word
Only available for essays I've already done edits on! You can send two essays if I've seen both before and they are from the same school.
Full Review | $25 + 13 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft. Only one essay at a time, please!
Specialties
College essays
$109.50
(Full Review | 650 words)
Elias Miller
4.9Elias Miller
4.9
I graduated from Harvard University summa cum laude and then completed my master’s degree at the University of Michigan and the postgraduate diploma program at the University for Music and Performing Arts, Vienna. I have helped dozens of students gain acceptance to their top-choice schools including Harvard, Yale, MIT, Columbia, Cornell, Dartmouth, Johns Hopkins, Northwestern, and Duke. I have also advised and mentored thousands more through my livestreams. In addition to my work in college consulting, I am a professional conductor and a multi-instrumentalist. I currently serve as Music Director of The Apollo Ensemble of Boston, and I have worked as an assistant conductor with the New York Philharmonic, the Minnesota Orchestra, the Nashville Symphony, the Buffalo Philharmonic, and more. I have led symphonic concerts and operatic productions throughout the United States and in Europe.
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Topic Check | $20 + 12 cents per word
Feedback and guidance on the direction of your topic and themes. Recommended if you’re unsure about your topic and essay outline.
Full Review | $30 + 30 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$225.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Robert Carlson
4.9Robert Carlson
4.9
My name is Robert Carlson. I live in Washington, DC, and I graduated summa cum laude and Phi Beta Kappa from Duke University. With seven years of experience as a tutor, teaching assistant, learning pod instructor, and writing coach, I’m passionate about helping students in their admissions journey.
As an alumni interviewer for Duke admissions, I’ve learned what top schools are looking for. I used those tips when I applied to grad school. After acceptances from Harvard, Columbia, Georgetown, and other schools, I decided to attend Johns Hopkins University—where I received a merit-based scholarship covering 80% of tuition. I look forward to sharing the same tips with you.
Prior to starting grad school, I was the lead editor for Global Americans, a magazine focused on foreign policy. I’ve also written my own work in outlets such as The Diplomat and World Politics Review. I draw on this experience as a college coach, helping students turn their ideas into memorable and effective essays.
As an alumni interviewer for Duke admissions, I’ve learned what top schools are looking for. I used those tips when I applied to grad school. After acceptances from Harvard, Columbia, Georgetown, and other schools, I decided to attend Johns Hopkins University—where I received a merit-based scholarship covering 80% of tuition. I look forward to sharing the same tips with you.
Prior to starting grad school, I was the lead editor for Global Americans, a magazine focused on foreign policy. I’ve also written my own work in outlets such as The Diplomat and World Politics Review. I draw on this experience as a college coach, helping students turn their ideas into memorable and effective essays.
Review options
Second Round Review | $15 + 12 cents per word
Already received my comments on your draft but want me to take another look? I'll provide comments on your updated draft. This review is available for students who have previously purchased the full review or who have received my live essay feedback in a one-on-one session.
Full Review | $25 + 19 cents per word
Have your essay reviewed by a professional editor. I'll suggest direct edits to the text, as well as provide comments in the margin.
Supplements Package | $35 + 19 cents per word
Do you have multiple essays for a single school? I'll be happy to review them together.
Specialties
College essays
$158.50
(Supplements Package | 650 words)
Adrian Russian
5.0Adrian Russian
5.0
Adrian is originally from Everett, WA, about 30 miles north of Seattle, and graduated cum laude from Dartmouth College in 2021 after majoring in philosophy and minoring in neuroscience. Following graduation, she worked for Dartmouth's Italian language study abroad program in Rome, Italy for a year, then spent a year traveling while working remotely as an editor and research assistant, in addition to her work with CollegeVine. She is currently based in New York City. While working for CollegeVine, she has become intimately familiar with all aspects of the college process, from crafting a strong school list to essay writing to interview prep.
Review options
Full Review | $35 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$100.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Samantha Geary
5.0Samantha Geary
5.0
Sam graduated from Wake Forest University in 2015 with a B.A. in History (with honors) and Anthropology with a minor in Schools, Education and Society.
She then spent two years serving as an English Teaching Assistant in Indonesia (Manado and Labuan Bajo) with the Fulbright Program, where she taught 10th grade students, contributed to regional grant projects and learned Bahasa Indonesia. For over 5 years, she served as the Director of College Access and Completion for Breakthrough San Juan Capistrano, where she managed programming for over 200 11th grade – college students. During her tenure, Sam counseled over 120 students through the college admissions process, and continued to advise them during their time in college. Sam currently serves as the College Access and Success Manager for the Breakthrough Collaborative, where she create curriculum and resources, manages resource projects and communities of practice, and develops strategic partnerships in service of Breakthrough's 24 affiliate college access programs across the country. Sam is passionate about educational equity, immigrants rights, cultural exchange and is grateful to work alongside fantastic students and families each day. Outside of her work in education, Sam enjoys fiber arts (knitting, handspinning, natural dyeing), foraging, and surfing along the California coast.
She then spent two years serving as an English Teaching Assistant in Indonesia (Manado and Labuan Bajo) with the Fulbright Program, where she taught 10th grade students, contributed to regional grant projects and learned Bahasa Indonesia. For over 5 years, she served as the Director of College Access and Completion for Breakthrough San Juan Capistrano, where she managed programming for over 200 11th grade – college students. During her tenure, Sam counseled over 120 students through the college admissions process, and continued to advise them during their time in college. Sam currently serves as the College Access and Success Manager for the Breakthrough Collaborative, where she create curriculum and resources, manages resource projects and communities of practice, and develops strategic partnerships in service of Breakthrough's 24 affiliate college access programs across the country. Sam is passionate about educational equity, immigrants rights, cultural exchange and is grateful to work alongside fantastic students and families each day. Outside of her work in education, Sam enjoys fiber arts (knitting, handspinning, natural dyeing), foraging, and surfing along the California coast.
Review options
Topic Check | $15 + 5 cents per word
I will read your intended topic, outline, or essay draft and offer feedback on your topic choice.
Full Review | $25 + 10 cents per word
A thorough review of your essay draft- best for students with rough or full drafts.
Follow-up Essay Review | $25 + 5 cents per word
This type of review is for future drafts of an essay that has been previously reviewed by me. I will review 2nd, 3rd, 4th, etc. drafts of essays to offer additional feedback and support, and to get your essay closer to finalization and submission!
Note: This type of review is not available for essays that I have not yet reviewed. If you have not yet submitted your essay to me for review, please use the "Full Review," "Topic Check," or "UC Personal Insight Question Review" options instead.
UC Personal Insight Questions Review | $25 + 10 cents per word
Submit all or some of your PIQ drafts. I will provide a thorough review of your responses, and feedback on your overall topic choice for your PIQs.
Specialties
College essays
$90.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Subha Subramanian
4.8Subha Subramanian
4.8
I have been reviewing and editing essays and other writing for friends and family as long back as I can remember, including helping edit 3 books. I have also have been credited in "Web Redesign 2.0 | Workflow That Works" for my contribution. I have been published in Parenting magazine and the SF Chronicle and have had several greeting card submissions accepted by Andrews McMeal. I had the distinct pleasure of reading my "Story Behind the Picture" on NPR (All Things Considered). I founded and edited the gotoreport - a web based usability magazine, and created content for a recipe blog called TasteBuds, in the early days of the internet. I am an avid reader, as you might expect. I have a Master's degree in Computer Science from the University of Houston. I look forward to working with you!
*Please note that I am not the best person to help you with crafting a college list. I am focused on helping students make their essays better!
*Please note that I am not the best person to help you with crafting a college list. I am focused on helping students make their essays better!
Review options
Proofreading - short essay (< 500 words) | $25 + 0 cents per word
Make sure your essay shines, with sentences that are clear, and support the overall points of your essay. Space is limited, so make sure every word pulls its weight. Lose or loose? It's or its? I can help review your essay so there are no typos and your ideas are not lost somewhere in the mix. Proofreading suggestions only. One round of with comprehensive feedback and edits.
Proofreading - long essay (> 500 words) | $50 + 0 cents per word
Make sure your essay shines, with sentences that are clear, and support the overall points of your essay. Space is limited, so make sure every word pulls its weight. Lose or loose? It's or its? I can help review your essay so there are no typos and your ideas are not lost somewhere in the mix. Proofreading suggestions only. One round of with comprehensive feedback and edits.
Short Essay Review - less than 500 words | $125 + 0 cents per word
Unlimited rounds of comprehensive offline reviews of your shorter essays (less than 500 words).
Single long essay review - unlimited offline edits | $175 + 0 cents per word
Use this for unlimited revisions for your longer essays (> 500 words). You can submit your essay via a doc (share with the link), and we can revisit that doc with unlimited edits until we are both satisfied. I will offer conceptual comments and specific editorial suggestions. Not for common app essay.
Per School Package | $300 + 0 cents per word
Review of draft (via docs) for all additional essays that are less than 500 words for a school, with unlimited offline feedback. I will offer brainstorming help, conceptual help, and specific editorial comments. This option is great for "Why this major", "Why this college" questions for schools that you are particularly interested in.
Not for UC PIQ or longer essays targeted at a specific program offered by the school. One package per school.
UC PIQ package | $400 + 0 cents per word
If you need help with your UC PIQ essays, pick this package. Essays are a critical part of your UC application, and we will work on making your essays reflect your personality in a way that's engaging and authentic.
The 5-essay Package (< 500 words) | $500 + 0 cents per word
Get unlimited rounds of edits with comprehensive feedback for any 5 essays. If you have your Common App essay ready and need to review supplemental essays, this is the package for you. Note: UC PIQ and essays > 500 words are not covered by this package.
Common App Review - Unlimited Offline Revisions | $700 + 0 cents per word
If you need to craft your best common app essay with unlimited offline back and forth, use this package. I will provide feedback on your topic, the structure of the essay, conceptual ideas, transitions between paragraphs and share advice for a strong beginning and ending. Of course, we will cover any issues with general proofreading as well.
Common app + 4 essays (< 500 words, offline) | $900 + 0 cents per word
If you are looking for unlimited offline help with your common app essay as well as 4 other (non-UC) essays that are less than 500 words in length, sign up for this package. I will help with conceptual comments and specific editorial suggestions until we are both happy with the result. This works well for essays that include "why this major" and "why this college" type of questions, with hints to reuse these essays for other colleges as well.
UC package: Common app + 4 UC essays (offline) | $1000 + 0 cents per word
If you need help with your common app essays and UC essays (with unlimited offline edits), pick this package. I will help you with conceptual comments, structure of your essays, "show, don't tell" and specific editorial suggestions until we are both happy with the result. Note: all the work is done offline with lots of back and forth with comments via Google docs.
The 12-essay package (< 500 words) | $1100 + 0 cents per word
Get unlimited rounds of edits with comprehensive feedback for any 12 essays. If you have your Common App essay ready and need to review supplemental essays, this is the package for you. Note: UC PIQ and essays > 500 words are not covered by this package.
The 20-essay package (< 500 words) | $1750 + 0 cents per word
Get unlimited rounds of edits with comprehensive feedback for any 17 essays. If you have your Common App essay ready and need to review supplemental essays, this is the package for you. Note: UC PIQ and essays > 500 words are not covered by this package.
Common App + 10 non-UC essays | $2000 + 0 cents per word
Get unlimited rounds of edits with comprehensive feedback for the Common App + 10 essays. If you are ready to start applying and need to make sure everything looks good, this is the package for you. Note: UC PIQ and essays > 500 words are not covered by this package.
Specialties
College essays
$2,000.00
(Common App + 10 non-UC essays | 650 words)
Jacquada Gray
4.6Jacquada Gray
4.6
Born and raised in Kansas City, Mo, Jacquada began her educational career in her hometown where she received a BA in History from the University of Missouri- KC. Her purpose in life is to pursue equitable education for all students and support them on their journeys to success. She currently works in University Admissions as an Application Reader and as a College & Career Access and Success Coach. Having worked in many educational positions from infants to college students for over 10 years, her professional career in the field began while serving as a College Advisor and a College Preparation instructor for HS students. Here she found a passion for collegiate access and success. After receiving her MA in Higher Education from Teachers College Columbia University, she focused on Higher Education success by continuing her teaching and coaching in a University setting. Throughout her career, Jacquada has assisted many students in navigating the college application process, financial aid, athletic recruitment, and even collegiate graduation. Former students have received full ride scholarships for athletics & academics, as well as attended D1 institutions including Ivy Leagues & HBCUs. Jacquada strongly believes that every student has the opportunity to be successful, and as an educator it is her goal to ensure that all students have the same support and opportunities to reach this success. Her hobbies include traveling, crafting and discovering new TV shows and movies!
Review options
Topic Check | $15 + 10 cents per word
Topic Review only. Ensures your essays flows and have properly answered the prompt. Does not include an extensive review of content and structure.
Re-Review | $20 + 10 cents per word
For individuals who have purchased any review previously and want to resubmit a the SAME essay.
Grammar & Formatting Check | $20 + 15 cents per word
Grammar & Formatting Review only. Includes flow and structure. Does not include an extensive review of content.
School Specific Essay Review | $30 + 20 cents per word
Review your Supplemental Essays. Detailed guidance focusing on your essay content, flow, & structure. Will include in-document feedback & suggestions, as well as a set of clear actionable next steps. *Includes simple grammar and punctuation check (full check if applicable). Submit as many Supplemental Essays as you need, must not exceed 650 word limit.
~Please note, the quality of the draft determines the amount of detail provided.~
Full Common App Essay Review | $30 + 15 cents per word
Review of your Common App Essay draft (Up to 650 words). Detailed guidance focusing on your essay content, flow, & structure. Will include in-document feedback & suggestions, as well as a set of clear actionable next steps.
*Includes simple grammar and punctuation check (if applicable)
~Please note, the quality of the draft determines the amount of detail provided. If you need a significant amount of adjustments your initial review may be more general advice, as my focus becomes content/flow.~
Scholarship Essay Review | $35 + 15 cents per word
For all scholarship essays. Add a link to the scholarship for review of their necessary requirements.
Specialties
College essays
$132.50
(Scholarship Essay Review | 650 words)
Philip Garcia
4.9Philip Garcia
4.9
***Update September 2023: Due to the current demand for support, I am no longer able to take on new clients. I will be available for essay review only.***
I'm an MIT grad and 10-year veteran of SpaceX. I’ve led and worked with some of the most talented and high-performing individuals on the planet.
With this experience, I developed a process to maximize the success of everyone I brought into my team at SpaceX. I focused on coaching and skills development, and the results were excellent: 100% of the people I hired were promoted to the highest level possible, and over half became team leaders in the organization.
I founded Fitzroya Consulting, an independent educational consultancy, to apply these processes to my student coaching today. My mission is to share those lessons with students to maximize their chances of getting into their top choice colleges and having success beyond in their careers.
I'm an MIT grad and 10-year veteran of SpaceX. I’ve led and worked with some of the most talented and high-performing individuals on the planet.
With this experience, I developed a process to maximize the success of everyone I brought into my team at SpaceX. I focused on coaching and skills development, and the results were excellent: 100% of the people I hired were promoted to the highest level possible, and over half became team leaders in the organization.
I founded Fitzroya Consulting, an independent educational consultancy, to apply these processes to my student coaching today. My mission is to share those lessons with students to maximize their chances of getting into their top choice colleges and having success beyond in their careers.
Review options
Full Service Review | $25 + 25 cents per word
✔ Review your profile and the information provided
✔ Review your essay draft
✔ Provide in-line detailed, actionable feedback for improving your essay content and/or framework
✔ Correct grammar and punctuation (if applicable)
✔ Provide a set of clear, actionable next steps
Specialties
College essays
$187.50
(Full Service Review | 650 words)
Emily Brother
Emily Brother
Hi! I'm Emily Brother and I graduated with honors from Harvard University in 2019 with a Bachelor of Arts. I have experience working at Harvard University in undergraduate student affairs and career advising, conducting alumni interviews for the Harvard Alumni Association, and guiding applicants through the college and graduate school application processes. My past clients have been admitted to the top schools of their choice including Harvard, Yale, Stanford, Columbia, MIT, and U.C. Berkeley.
Review options
Comprehensive Review | $50 + 15 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay with constructive feedback on essay structure, content, word choice, grammar, and style. This feedback will help you craft an essay that foregrounds your unique voice and perspective, presents a compelling personal narrative, and delivers a clear message.
Specialties
College essays
$147.50
(Comprehensive Review | 650 words)
Lori Zomback
4.8Lori Zomback
4.8
Lori is a lifelong New Yorker who graduated from Cornell University, where she majored in Biology and Society and minored in Spanish. She is now a fourth year medical student at SUNY Downstate and her work there centers on the intersection of clinical medicine and social justice. She has mentored many students through the undergraduate and medical school application process. She is excited to meet you and craft an application that will reflect your unique, authentic self so that you can confidently enter the pre-med or medical world! Outside of school, Lori enjoys teaching fitness classes, geeking out on Shakespeare, and eating bagels.
Review options
Essay Review | $50 + 2 cents per word
Review your profile and the information provided
Review your essay draft
Offer detailed guidance for refining your essay topic and structure
Leave in-document feedback and changes
Correct grammar and punctuation (if applicable)
Provide a set of clear actionable next steps
Specialties
College essays
$63.00
(Essay Review | 650 words)
Isha Dalal
Isha Dalal
Isha has over 4 years of experience collaborating with students, including working in the Yale Admissions office, to help them put their best foot forward in the college admissions process. She helps students with all aspects of the college journey from navigating extracurricular activities to bringing their supplemental essays across the finish line. She loves working with students and has several years of tutoring experience in addition to her college advising work. Isha graduated from Yale with a B.A. in Global Affairs. She conducted her own international relations research, helped spearhead global conferences in both China and South Korea, and played club squash. Isha has helped students successfully receive admission to several T25 schools, including Ivy League universities. In her own college admissions process, Isha received acceptances to several highly selective schools around the country and received multiple full tuition scholarships.
Review options
General Essay Review | $35 + 40 cents per word
Feel free to submit an essay of any length or topic for feedback. If you are looking for feedback on a specific aspect of the essay, make a note of that when sending.
Specialties
College essays
$295.00
(General Essay Review | 650 words)
Joseph Recupero
4.5Joseph Recupero
4.5
Hello! My name is Joseph and I am excited to have the opportunity to work with you as an admission advisor. As an advisor, I believe in a mentorship model in which my I not only advise my students step by step through the admission process, but also serve as a source of advice, guidance, and at time counseling through the stresses of high school and the college process. My academic background is in anthropology, having both my BA from Gettysburg College and my MA from Columbia University in the subject. I am currently pursuing my PhD in anthropology at the University of California - Davis with my research focusing on Urban studies and youth perception in Sarajevo. My admission experience includes working as a senior intern in the Gettysburg College Admissions Office, being a former Admissions Officer at Truman State University, and having multiple years of professional admission advising experience. Fun fact about me, I have been to 63 different countries.
Review options
Full Review | $25 + 8 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$77.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Priya Desai
4.9Priya Desai
4.9
Priya Desai has worked in college admissions for over five years and has helped others with writing for as long as she can remember! She graduated summa cum laude from UCLA's Class of 2020 with a Bachelor of Arts in Psychology and worked for a top human resources consulting firm shortly after graduation. During the pandemic, Priya realized her passion for helping others - especially students - feel more empowered in their educational and professional trajectory, and has now devoted her career entirely to admissions advising. Priya also has work experience in healthcare technology, marketing, teaching English to non-native speakers, and tutoring from the preschool to high school level. As an oldest sister and cousin, she is passionate about helping younger students navigate the often-confusing and seemingly opaque world of college admissions.
Review options
Topic Check | $15 + 5 cents per word
Feedback and guidance on the direction of your topic and themes. Recommended if you’re unsure about your topic and essay outline.
Full Review | $25 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$90.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Emily Kramer
5.0Emily Kramer
5.0
Emily graduated summa cum laude from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill in 2021 with a degree in Communications, Music, and Advertising & Public Relations. She has also taken courses in screenwriting, sketch comedy writing, and media production. Emily has been mentoring students for 5+ years. She began as an Admissions Ambassador at UNC, where she regularly advised students on every part of the college process-- whether it be how to choose essay topics, choose a major, or make friends. Emily also interned with UNC's office of Undergraduate Admissions, where she handled correspondence with prospective students and worked to share UNC's mission and goals via social media, giving her a unique insider perspective in the advising space. After graduating, Emily started editing essays for international students and continues to use her writing experience to help make sure their personality and experience shines through on the page. Emily is based in Los Angeles, where she works at an entertainment marketing firm and plays french horn in a local LA orchestra. In her free time, Emily enjoys all things puzzles, trivia, and escape rooms, and has even written games for NPR's Ask Me Another.
Review options
Second Draft Full Review | $15 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive second round of feedback for an essay I have previously reviewed.
Multiple Short Essays | $25 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of two or more shorter essays (max 50 words each). Recommended if you have multiple 50 word, 25 word, or single word supplemental essays.
Full Review | $35 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
UNC Supplements (2 essays in 1 submission) | $35 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your UNC supplemental essays (2 essays, 250 words each) at a discounted rate.
UC PIQs (4 essays in 1 submission) | $90 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your UC Personal Interest Questions (4 essays, 350 words each) at a discounted rate.
Specialties
College essays
$155.00
(UC PIQs (4 essays in 1 submission) | 650 words)
Olga Ivleva
4.9Olga Ivleva
4.9
Olga is a recent graduate from Columbia University, where she studied Computer Science and Cold War History. Although she currently works full time as a Data Scientist at Spotify, she has been working part time in the college advising industry since her freshman year of college. Olga helped many students secure admission to top universities, including Stanford, Princeton, Carnegie Mellon, Columbia, UPenn, Duke, Northwestern and Williams College, and specializes in elite university admissions. A New Jersey native, she has been living in NYC for the last 9 years, where she currently resides and works. Her other interests include skiing, cooking and adopting new plants. She also has work experience in the finance, tech and legal industries.
Review options
Full Review | $46 + 16 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft complete with detailed comments and suggestions. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$150.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Kevin Dupont
Kevin Dupont
Hello, Hola, Ola, Bonjour, Marhaban! My name is Kevin and I am a counsellor based in Dubai, United Arab Emirates. I can share my insights with you about the admissions officers' side of things from when I worked in the admissions offices at Cornell, the University of California - Berkeley, University of Virginia, University of Colorado-Boulder, Bentley, the University of California - Santa Cruz, and Texas A&M - Corpus Christi!
My student acceptances to esteemed universities such as: MIT, Harvard, Stanford, Princeton, Yale, Cornell, Georgetown, the University of Chicago, Brown University, Carnegie Mellon University, McGill University, Emory University, Tufts University, and countless others.
My student acceptances to esteemed universities such as: MIT, Harvard, Stanford, Princeton, Yale, Cornell, Georgetown, the University of Chicago, Brown University, Carnegie Mellon University, McGill University, Emory University, Tufts University, and countless others.
Review options
Two Essay Review! | $85 + 0 cents per word
This package includes the review of two essays of the student's choosing - Personal Statement/supplement or two supplements. Students can purchase multiple packages as they see fit, and live meetings can be purchased at an additional rate (please see Kevin's Marketplace Profile for more information).
Ten across the board | $500 + 0 cents per word
This is a comprehensive essay review, with annotated feedback from a former Ivy League admissions officer. Live meetings can be purchased at an additional rate (please see Kevin's Marketplace Profile for more information).
Maximum essays to be reviewed in this package: 10
Read it all! | $1500 + 0 cents per word
This is an unlimited essay package where students can submit all of their university application written materials (Personal Statements, supplements, CV, Activities List, etc.) for review without numeric limitation.
This package is for students applying to many schools, with large amounts of application materials.
Specialties
College essays
$1,500.00
(Read it all! | 650 words)
Ethan Glasserman
Ethan Glasserman
I’m a writer. Not a college guidance counselor, not an expert on admissions—a writer. For the last twelve years, I’ve been devoted to writing fiction. Back in the day, I also wrote screenplays, a webseries, comedy pieces, and two parody novels I self-published. After graduating from Harvard University with a degree in psychology, I completed an M.F.A. in creative writing at Boston University. Over more than a decade of studying fiction line by line and holding myself to an exacting standard, I’ve learned how to tell a story.
What I have to offer is expertise in writing and a perspective that isn’t limited by the confines of the college admissions process. While I can give you a few general pointers about the broader application process, a strength of mine is that I have a rich personal and professional life outside of this field. Throughout college and graduate school, I’ve studied a range of subjects, including computer science, statistics, neuroscience, filmmaking, literature, and psychoanalysis. On my own, I’m an avid reader familiar with a variety of interests from visual art to cooking to theories of consciousness.
Another important part of my background is that I have worked in mental health for six years and am training as a clinical psychologist. That means I know how to take a real interest in people, learn what makes them distinctive, and help them through an anxiety-provoking process.
If any of the above sounds like what you’re looking for, please reach out. Most of my clients come from independent referrals off CollegeVine, as I primarily work as a team with an independent guidance counselor with decades of experience. I work with a relatively small number of students each year, which allows me to give each one the attention they need. Last year alone, I had students admitted to Penn and Cornell. I’m particularly experienced in working with kids in STEM who are struggling to stand out, students who cultivate an artistic practice, and those who have trouble getting the first words on paper.
What I have to offer is expertise in writing and a perspective that isn’t limited by the confines of the college admissions process. While I can give you a few general pointers about the broader application process, a strength of mine is that I have a rich personal and professional life outside of this field. Throughout college and graduate school, I’ve studied a range of subjects, including computer science, statistics, neuroscience, filmmaking, literature, and psychoanalysis. On my own, I’m an avid reader familiar with a variety of interests from visual art to cooking to theories of consciousness.
Another important part of my background is that I have worked in mental health for six years and am training as a clinical psychologist. That means I know how to take a real interest in people, learn what makes them distinctive, and help them through an anxiety-provoking process.
If any of the above sounds like what you’re looking for, please reach out. Most of my clients come from independent referrals off CollegeVine, as I primarily work as a team with an independent guidance counselor with decades of experience. I work with a relatively small number of students each year, which allows me to give each one the attention they need. Last year alone, I had students admitted to Penn and Cornell. I’m particularly experienced in working with kids in STEM who are struggling to stand out, students who cultivate an artistic practice, and those who have trouble getting the first words on paper.
Review options
Full Essay Review (First Time Discount) | $150 + 20 cents per word
Discount for first-time customers.
Full Essay Review (I'm Thorough!) | $180 + 25 cents per word
When I say I'm a thorough essay reviewer, I mean it. I provide feedback on all aspects of your writing, from the topic and core theme to commas. Choose this option if you're looking to be challenged.
Specialties
College essays
$342.50
(Full Essay Review (I'm Thorough!) | 650 words)
Charlie Park Albright
Charlie Park Albright
My clients (FirsthandIvy.com) have been accepted to and attend the best colleges, music conservatories, and 5-Year AB/MM Joint Programs in the world, including Harvard, Yale, Princeton, Stanford, Columbia, University of Pennsylvania, Duke, and more. I have a unique perspective unlike any other advisor/tutor in that I have also personally been accepted to, attended, and graduated from the best academic and music schools in the world...along with the 5-year AB/MM Joint Program.
I graduated Harvard College with an Economics degree (A.B.) (and did many pre-med requirements too!), a Masters of Music (M.M.) in Piano Performance from NEC, and the Artist Diploma (A.D.) in Piano Performance from the Juilliard School of Music. I was the first classical pianist in the Harvard/New England Conservatory of Music 5-Year AB/MM Joint Program, and was accepted to many other top-tier academic universities, music conservatories, and 5-Year Joint Programs, including Yale, Stanford, Columbia, Johns Hopkins, the Curtis Institute of Music, and more.
I'm am an actively touring classical concert pianist, and separately have worked with students as young as elementary school through high school on everything from homework and learning ahead of their grade level, to planning courses/extracurriculars and helping them prepare rockstar college applications. I am half-Korean and speak Korean fluently.
Let me help you put your best self forward in your academics, and help you aim to make your college and/or music conservatory dreams come true.
For more information, check out CharlieAlbright.com (piano) and FirsthandIvy.com (academics).
I graduated Harvard College with an Economics degree (A.B.) (and did many pre-med requirements too!), a Masters of Music (M.M.) in Piano Performance from NEC, and the Artist Diploma (A.D.) in Piano Performance from the Juilliard School of Music. I was the first classical pianist in the Harvard/New England Conservatory of Music 5-Year AB/MM Joint Program, and was accepted to many other top-tier academic universities, music conservatories, and 5-Year Joint Programs, including Yale, Stanford, Columbia, Johns Hopkins, the Curtis Institute of Music, and more.
I'm am an actively touring classical concert pianist, and separately have worked with students as young as elementary school through high school on everything from homework and learning ahead of their grade level, to planning courses/extracurriculars and helping them prepare rockstar college applications. I am half-Korean and speak Korean fluently.
Let me help you put your best self forward in your academics, and help you aim to make your college and/or music conservatory dreams come true.
For more information, check out CharlieAlbright.com (piano) and FirsthandIvy.com (academics).
Review options
Essay/Prompt Review | Please Read Description! | $1000 + 0 cents per word
*For essay review, please instead book "Live 1-on-1 College Essay Review/Discussion" Themed Session*
I strongly recommend essays and writing prompts to be read through and reviewed together, live with the student, in normal sessions (this allows a back-and-forth to really get at what it is the student's intentions are in their writing). I don't believe that simply writing feedback is the best way to arrive at the best possible essay, which is why working together to develop a topic and talk through the writing is preferred. To work together on an essay (whether you're just starting out, polishing a finished essay, or anything in between), please book normal consulting sessions and we can work together to help make it as great as possible.
If for some reason, that is not possible, this essay/prompt review option can be booked. I will review your essay or writing prompt, writing notes.
Specialties
College essays
$1,000.00
(Essay/Prompt Review | Please Read Description! | 650 words)
Denise Haile
4.7Denise Haile
4.7
Throughout my extensive 20-year career, my focus has primarily been on admissions work. Over the past five years, I have been employed as an Independent Educational Consultant, where my primary responsibility has been guiding and assisting numerous students each year in their successful applications to prestigious institutions such as Harvard University and other highly competitive universities. As a Harvard graduate myself, I take great pleasure in supporting students who aspire to navigate the application process with minimal stress.
My experience focuses on domestic students and first-generation college applicants. In addition, I have also worked with students from diverse backgrounds from around the world. To actively recruit students, I have traveled extensively, visiting numerous countries including India, Canada, China, Brazil, Ghana, the UK, Korea, and Spain. By limiting the number of students I work with, I ensure that each individual receives the personalized attention they deserve, allowing them to thrive throughout the application journey.
My experience focuses on domestic students and first-generation college applicants. In addition, I have also worked with students from diverse backgrounds from around the world. To actively recruit students, I have traveled extensively, visiting numerous countries including India, Canada, China, Brazil, Ghana, the UK, Korea, and Spain. By limiting the number of students I work with, I ensure that each individual receives the personalized attention they deserve, allowing them to thrive throughout the application journey.
Review options
Essay review | $150 + 0 cents per word
Let’s meet your deadline by getting a professional evaluation.
Specialties
College essays
$150.00
(Essay review | 650 words)
Stephanie Vitanzo
Stephanie Vitanzo
I am deeply invested in and committed to supporting the unique academic and emotional journeys of each student. I am truly at my best when helping others and have been fascinated by human relationships and interpersonal communication from a young age.
As a licensed K12 school counselor, I have dedicated the past 17 years to working with students both at the higher ed and secondary level including college counseling and advising, career development, individual and small group counseling, peer conflict and mediation as well as expressive arts therapy.Through my work in schools, I have seen first-hand the transformative nature of establishing positive relationships with youth. I deliver a deft blend of counseling and advocacy skills which have proven successful in helping others navigate the many social and emotional challenges of middle school, high school and beyond.
My focus is helping students and their families explore, develop – and ultimately achieve – their personal goals. Frankly, applying to college is much more than checklists, essay writing, and mastering deadlines. I understand the relational nuances and big picture impact that the college process has on students and their families. I can provide more than solely admissions experience when helping with the college process. One-on-one coaching allows me to employ both my admission and counseling skills to empower and advise students on their journey to post secondary life.
I hold a BA in Psychology from Muhlenberg College, an MEd in Higher Ed. Administration from Northeastern University and a MA in Counseling from Montclair State University. There is no one size fits all approach. I find I do my best work when meeting the student where they are and developing a personalized plan together. Questions? Let's Talk! I look forward to our partnership.
As a licensed K12 school counselor, I have dedicated the past 17 years to working with students both at the higher ed and secondary level including college counseling and advising, career development, individual and small group counseling, peer conflict and mediation as well as expressive arts therapy.Through my work in schools, I have seen first-hand the transformative nature of establishing positive relationships with youth. I deliver a deft blend of counseling and advocacy skills which have proven successful in helping others navigate the many social and emotional challenges of middle school, high school and beyond.
My focus is helping students and their families explore, develop – and ultimately achieve – their personal goals. Frankly, applying to college is much more than checklists, essay writing, and mastering deadlines. I understand the relational nuances and big picture impact that the college process has on students and their families. I can provide more than solely admissions experience when helping with the college process. One-on-one coaching allows me to employ both my admission and counseling skills to empower and advise students on their journey to post secondary life.
I hold a BA in Psychology from Muhlenberg College, an MEd in Higher Ed. Administration from Northeastern University and a MA in Counseling from Montclair State University. There is no one size fits all approach. I find I do my best work when meeting the student where they are and developing a personalized plan together. Questions? Let's Talk! I look forward to our partnership.
Review options
Full Review | $65 + 20 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$195.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Kim Lifton
Kim Lifton
Kim Lifton is president and co-founder of Wow Writing Workshop (https://wowwritingworkshop.com/). Since 2009, Wow has been transforming the college essay experience from daunting and frightening to calm and empowering. In addition to working with students, Wow trains high school counselors, teachers, and independent consultants. Kim and co-founder/CEO Susan Knoppow are members or affiliates of many professional counseling organizations. A former executive speechwriter and trainer, Susan is also a published poet and essayist. She holds a BA in Psychology from the University of Michigan and an MFA in Writing from Vermont College.
Kim and Susan publish widely and are sought-after speakers for student and professional groups around the world. You can download a free copy of their book, How to Write an Effective College Application Essay at https://wowwritingworkshop.com/free-student-book/. They also manage a small team of top-notch writing coaches (https://wowwritingworkshop.com/about/).
Kim and Susan publish widely and are sought-after speakers for student and professional groups around the world. You can download a free copy of their book, How to Write an Effective College Application Essay at https://wowwritingworkshop.com/free-student-book/. They also manage a small team of top-notch writing coaches (https://wowwritingworkshop.com/about/).
Review options
Final Essay Proofread | $50 + 10 cents per word
We will review the essay for clarity and consistency, consistent punctuation, accurate spelling, and consistent use of numbers or numerals. We'll also pay attention to malapropisms and homonyms.If the writer uses collaborate instead of corroborate, we'll mark it and note the correct word. If you use bear/bare incorrectly, we'll do the same.
Single Essay Review | $125 + 25 cents per word
This is a more extensive essay review for students who want to make sure their essay is effective. We'll read for content, structure, and polish, paying attention to the information college admissions officers tell us they look for in a college essay. We'll make sure the writer has answered the prompt with a meaningful story that is reflective. We'll correct spelling and punctuation errors, let the writer know what works well, and make suggestions for improvement in the margins.
Specialties
College essays
$287.50
(Single Essay Review | 650 words)
Brian Gu
5.0Brian Gu
5.0
Hi! My name is Brian and I graduated from Johns Hopkins University in 2021 with a BA in Public Health Studies. While at Hopkins, I was a Pre-Med and heavily involved in medical-related extracurriculars such as biochemistry and immunology research, clinical volunteering, and being Editor-In-Chief of a medical news journal. I also interned in the field of public health, completing internships in tobacco policy research and mental health research. I spent one gap year working as a medical assistant at an orthopedic clinic and will attend the University of Iowa for medical school in Fall 2022.I previously worked as an Applications Consultant at CollegeVine for two years, guiding clients through all aspects of the college applications process including school list creation, essay editing, and interview prep. In particular, I have a thorough understanding of how to write successful college essays from my own experiences of applying to college and medical school as well as editing my clients' essays. My clients have achieved acceptances to schools like Duke and Dartmouth, as well as the Brown Program in Liberal Medical Education.
Review options
Full Review | $35 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Specialties
College essays
$100.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Anna Tanaka
5.0Anna Tanaka
5.0
Anna is currently a fourth year medical student at Case Western Reserve University. She holds a B.A in neuroscience from Northwestern University. Anna’s extensive essay editing experience is strengthened by her thorough and attentive approach to each essay. Her past clients have praised her ability to provide detailed, concrete feedback that is easy to understand. Anna has had success in helping students gain admission into their top choice schools such as Penn, Cornell, Georgetown, and Northwestern. Anna loves to be active, travel, and hang out with friends in her free time!
Review options
Full Review | $30 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft. Includes in-line edits, suggestions, and comments on overall content.
Specialties
College essays
$95.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Pascale Bradley
5.0Pascale Bradley
5.0
Over the past two years, Pascale has helped over a dozen students with every aspect of the college application process, from crafting a comprehensive list of schools to editing and polishing Common Application and school-specific supplemental essays. She graduated from Yale University with a Bachelor of Arts in English and French this past spring. Pascale worked as a tutor in both high school and college, and after graduation, she realized that she missed working with students. Having loved her own college experience, she is excited to help each of her clients apply to the best schools for their unique set of goals. While she enjoys working with clients with a diverse range of dream schools, she is especially familiar with the Ivy League admissions process, as she reviewed her own admissions file with a member of the Yale Admissions Office. Her admissions essay was featured in the book "50 Yale Admission Success Stories: And the Essays That Made Them Happen." Pascale currently lives in New York City and works at an engineering and consulting company.
Review options
Review of Supplemental Essays (One School) | $30 + 10 cents per word
I'll review all your supplemental essays for the same school and leave feedback on your topic choices, the structure of your essays, your word choice, your syntax, and your grammar, and make any other suggestions I think of.
Common App Review | $30 + 10 cents per word
I'll review your Common App essay and leave feedback on your topic, the structure of the essay, word choice, syntax, and grammar, and make any other suggestions I think of.
Specialties
College essays
$95.00
(Review of Supplemental Essays (One School) | 650 words)
Rekha Iyer
4.5Rekha Iyer
4.5
Rekha Iyer is a rising senior at Vanderbilt University from Naperville, Illinois double-majoring in a multidisciplinary path of Law, History, & Society as well as Human Organizational Development (the study and application of skills relating to corporate strategy, psychology, and communication). At Vanderbilt she was selected by the Office of Undergraduate Admissions, through a multistage interview process, to represent Vanderbilt as a Tour Guide. She also serves as the President of The Vanderbilt Moot Court Team, collaborating with Vanderbilt Law professors to train 35+ undergraduates selected by audition in brief writing & oral argumentation for nationally recognized AMCA tournaments. She also works with a student led pro-bono consulting organization on campus (SCNO), to provide Nashville nonprofits with strategic recommendations to help grow and optimize their businesses, and in turn, better serve the Nashville community at large. Although her experiences with internships and on campus have primarily been in the legal and consulting spaces, Rekha has decided to pursue her passion for service through a career in medicine, and intends to apply to medical school following her graduation.
Review options
Full Review | $35 + 3 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
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College essays
$54.50
(Full Review | 650 words)
Sophie Alina
5.0Sophie Alina
5.0
I'm so proud of my students!!! From full-tuition scholarships to admissions into Ivy League schools, congratulations to each one of you in the Class of 2023!
I am a Vanderbilt Ph.D. student and Russell Hamilton Scholar at the Peabody College of Education and Human Development. As an Applications Consultant, I have collaborated with students to gain Ivy League acceptances, full-tuition scholarships, and admission into top-choice schools.
As a teacher for three years, I have worked with over 400 elementary, middle, and high school students, giving me the skills to break down difficult topics into organized steps and work with students with a variety of learning differences and skills. As a graduate student and Master of Education graduate, I not only have strong writing chops, but also the ability to teach these skills to the students I work with. One Harvard professor said that the opening to my Ph.D. personal statement was one of the best introductions they had ever read.
In high school, my Indian mother inspired me to pursue academics and music. I was valedictorian, a National Merit Scholar, and won third place in my category in the Texas State Science Fair. I also founded a math club at my elementary school. For three years, I did research at my local university. In the summers, I was accepted into highly selective research opportunities. I was also an avid violinist. My passions for research, music, and math are all part of my journey today.
After being awarded three full-tuition scholarships, I attended Vanderbilt on a full-tuition merit-based scholarship as a Cornelius Vanderbilt Scholar. There, I majored in mathematics and received Honors in the College of Arts & Sciences and graduated as a Top 20 Outstanding Senior. As a former premed student (I plan to pursue my M.D. after the completion of my Ph.D.), math major, violin performance minor, and social science researcher, I have a strong interdisciplinary foundation. This background enables me to effectively work with students to blend complex ideas with personal experiences to create compelling essays. I am extremely excited to use my experience as an applications consultant, teacher, and student to help you create a competitive application that shows how amazing you truly are. I cannot wait to work with you! Schedule a first-time consultation, select a package, or send in an essay for review, and you’ll hear back from me soon.
I am a Vanderbilt Ph.D. student and Russell Hamilton Scholar at the Peabody College of Education and Human Development. As an Applications Consultant, I have collaborated with students to gain Ivy League acceptances, full-tuition scholarships, and admission into top-choice schools.
As a teacher for three years, I have worked with over 400 elementary, middle, and high school students, giving me the skills to break down difficult topics into organized steps and work with students with a variety of learning differences and skills. As a graduate student and Master of Education graduate, I not only have strong writing chops, but also the ability to teach these skills to the students I work with. One Harvard professor said that the opening to my Ph.D. personal statement was one of the best introductions they had ever read.
In high school, my Indian mother inspired me to pursue academics and music. I was valedictorian, a National Merit Scholar, and won third place in my category in the Texas State Science Fair. I also founded a math club at my elementary school. For three years, I did research at my local university. In the summers, I was accepted into highly selective research opportunities. I was also an avid violinist. My passions for research, music, and math are all part of my journey today.
After being awarded three full-tuition scholarships, I attended Vanderbilt on a full-tuition merit-based scholarship as a Cornelius Vanderbilt Scholar. There, I majored in mathematics and received Honors in the College of Arts & Sciences and graduated as a Top 20 Outstanding Senior. As a former premed student (I plan to pursue my M.D. after the completion of my Ph.D.), math major, violin performance minor, and social science researcher, I have a strong interdisciplinary foundation. This background enables me to effectively work with students to blend complex ideas with personal experiences to create compelling essays. I am extremely excited to use my experience as an applications consultant, teacher, and student to help you create a competitive application that shows how amazing you truly are. I cannot wait to work with you! Schedule a first-time consultation, select a package, or send in an essay for review, and you’ll hear back from me soon.
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Full Review | $100 + 10 cents per word
I offer a comprehensive review of your essay draft. Only 1 full review per essay (so 3 supplementals = 3 submissions). Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
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College essays
$165.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Gabe Henry Woody
5.0Gabe Henry Woody
5.0
Hi! I recently graduated with College Honors from UCLA where I double majored in mathematics and geography.
Over the past six years I have guided over 75 students and their families through the admissions process from start to finish. I have helped my students gain admission to universities such as MIT, UCLA, UC Berkeley, Duke, Rice, NYU, Cornell, Vanderbilt, Carnegie Mellon, Georgia Tech, the University of Michigan, UT Austin, UCSD, UCSB, UCI, as well as many others!
When I applied to college, I was admitted to a number of selective programs, like UCSB's College of Creative Studies, and was nominated for prestigious scholarships like UC Berkeley's Regents and Chancellor's Scholarship.
In my free time I love to do mathematical research, play baseball, surf, cook, and travel the world.
Over the past six years I have guided over 75 students and their families through the admissions process from start to finish. I have helped my students gain admission to universities such as MIT, UCLA, UC Berkeley, Duke, Rice, NYU, Cornell, Vanderbilt, Carnegie Mellon, Georgia Tech, the University of Michigan, UT Austin, UCSD, UCSB, UCI, as well as many others!
When I applied to college, I was admitted to a number of selective programs, like UCSB's College of Creative Studies, and was nominated for prestigious scholarships like UC Berkeley's Regents and Chancellor's Scholarship.
In my free time I love to do mathematical research, play baseball, surf, cook, and travel the world.
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• Review your profile and the information provided
• Review your essay draft
• Offer detailed guidance for refining your essay topic and structure
• Leave in-document feedback and changes
• Correct grammar and punctuation (if applicable)
• Provide a set of clear actionable next steps
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College essays
$118.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Amy Kramer
5.0Amy Kramer
5.0
Amy Kramer graduated from Duke University in 2018 as a Robertson Scholar with highest honors in Public Policy and Political Science. She then earned her master’s degree in Global Affairs from Tsinghua University (Beijing, China) as a Schwarzman Scholar. Amy is a DC-based government employee working for the Department of Defense, but before joining the civil service, she worked in the Duke Office of Government Relations and also served a two-year term on the Duke Board of Trustees. Amy is a professional copy-editor with extensive experience advising domestic and international students throughout the entire college application process, at both the undergraduate and graduate levels. Amy has copy-edited over 500,000 words as a college essay consultant for three companies and comprehensively managed essay content development for hundreds of individual clients since 2014. Amy has also worked as a professional speechwriter. Before attending Duke, Amy graduated from a high school of the arts and especially loves helping musicians articulate their artistic passions to academic institutions. In her free time, Amy plays bassoon in a local DC orchestra.
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A comprehensive review of your essay draft by a professional editor. Receive comprehensive tracked-changes and comments in the margin. Suitable for essay drafts at any stage.
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Submit ALL your University of California essays in one submission and save $35! (Please note which 4 essay prompts you have selected)
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College essays
$170.00
(UC Supplements (All 4 Supplements in 1 Submission) | 650 words)
Abby Purfeerst
Abby Purfeerst
Hello! I'm Abby. I have been working as a professional college counselor and tutor since 2015. I received my undergraduate degree from Macalester College in St. Paul, Minnesota, where I studied linguistics and French. I then pursued a Master's Certificate in College Counseling from the University of California San Diego. I got my start in the tutoring world through working at Lindamood-Bell Learning Center during college, and I quickly discovered my passion for helping students reach their educational goals. With experience in tutoring anything from reading and comprehension to the SAT and ACT, I enjoy helping students of all ages reach their full potentials. My area of expertise today is all things college prep: general college counseling, college application essay help, general essay writing skills, college application completion, ACT test prep, and SAT test prep. When I'm not busy working with students you can find me curled up with a good book or traveling to warm places. I'd be happy to help you reach your goals!
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Full review | $50 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
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College essays
$115.00
(Full review | 650 words)
Karen Tai
4.9Karen Tai
4.9
Hi! I'm Karen Tai and I recently graduated from Yale University, where I studied Molecular Biology. At Yale, I was involved in a number of community service organizations and spent lots of time in the laboratories conducting biomedical research. I've had extensive experience writing personal statements for admissions to schools as well as scholarships, such as the Rhodes Scholarship. I've also helped several clients gain admissions to their top school through advising and essay review session. I've studied at the University of Oxford for a Master's and am currently pursuing an MD at the Johns Hopkins University. In my free time, I love exploring new board games to play and testing out recipes in my kitchen. Excited to work with you in preparing for college and beyond! Feel free to opt into the essay review or reserve a time in my office hours for general admissions consultation or an essay brainstorming session.
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A comprehensive review of your essay draft. You will receive a well-annotated and commented document of your draft with essay suggestions. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
Essay/common app consultation (30 min) | $45 + 0 cents per word
A 30-minute, comprehensive review of a 0-500 word essay and/or common app through zoom/call. Feedback will only be provided over call (not commented on a document) and is recommended for discussing writing strategies, brainstorming sections, talking through and rewording parts of the essay.
Essay/common app consultation (60 min) | $75 + 0 cents per word
A 60-minute, comprehensive review of a 500+ word essay and/or common app through zoom/call. Feedback will only be provided over call (not commented on a document) and is recommended for discussing writing strategies, brainstorming sections, talking through and rewording parts of the essay.
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College essays
$75.00
(Essay/common app consultation (60 min) | 650 words)
Shane Niesen
5.0Shane Niesen
5.0
Shane originally grew up on the Mississippi Gulf Coast and graduated from Brown University in 2020 with an Honors degree in History. He began mentoring aspiring college admits through CollegeVine while at Brown, and afterwards he worked behind the scenes writing materials for CollegeVine's livestreams and YouTube videos. He is now an incoming PhD student studying History at the University of Michigan. Outside of work Shane enjoys cooking, reading, and spending time with his cat, Mirna.
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Get feedback on the general direction of one of your college essays, with tips for refining your topic. Can also review an outline.
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Full, detailed review of one of your college essays with in-line comments and general feedback.
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College essays
$95.00
(Full review | 650 words)
Juna Gjata
Juna Gjata
My academic background is primarily in the life sciences--particularly Cognitive Neuroscience and Evolutionary Psychology. However, my professional experience skews more towards digital media and production. I am passionate about helping students bring out their best qualities and chose a career path that fulfills and sustains them.
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Full Review | $35 + 10 cents per word
A comprehensive review of your essay draft. Recommended if you have a rough or strong draft.
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College essays
$100.00
(Full Review | 650 words)
Sri Srinivasan
Sri Srinivasan
Just as my mentors have helped me define and reach my own goals, I hope to focus my time and energy on ambitious students who are embarking on their own journeys through college and beyond. I was accepted to the University of Oklahoma College of Medicine's BS/MD program, and since 2020, I have been working with students in the BS/MD and pre-med admissions processes to secure their spot into careers as future physicians. Currently, I am a second-year medical student with an interest in interventional radiology.
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Basic Essay Review | $5 + 10 cents per word
General essay review for supplementals, research/summer programs, etc.
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College essays
$70.00
(Basic Essay Review | 650 words)
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