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College Essays and Military Life: Is It Overdone?

As a military child, I've moved around a lot. It's really impacted my life and shaped me as a person, and I'm thinking of writing my college essay about it. But I'm worried it's a common essay topic. Thoughts?

a year ago

Moving around as a military child is indeed an experience that many students write about, but that doesn't mean it can't make for a compelling essay. Ultimately, it's not about the commonality of the topic, but how you approach it. The best essays showcase unique aspects about your personality and experiences.

Now, an essay about moving around a lot could easily fall into cliches like learning adaptability or cultural understanding. To avoid that, consider focusing on specific anecdotes or insights that you've gained which might be distinct to your experiences.

For example, perhaps all the transitions fostered in you a keen interest in languages or local history, and you have combined these somehow in your high school years, such as starting a regional history club or creating a local language app. Or maybe being the "new kid" frequently led you to develop a passion for creating inclusive spaces, leading you to establish welcome groups for new students at your schools.

These are just illustrations, your story should be individually reflective of your journey. The more it is centered around your personal growth and lessons, the less likely it will feel "overdone." Remember, nobody can tell your story but you. Focus on what makes you unique and let that shine through in your essay.

a year ago

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