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Looking for Examples of Memorable Musical Experiences in College Essays

What's good everybody? Music plays a major role in my life and I want to incorporate a memorable musical experience I had in my essay. Any examples where someone did this successfully? My aim is to relay my passion without sounding too braggy or cliché!

a year ago

Absolutely, there are many ways to successfully incorporate a memorable musical experience into your college essay. Here's an example to spark some inspiration:

One student could write about the time she was assigned the task of composing her school's prestigious winter choir concert's finale song. On its surface, the essay recounts the rigorous creative process: from the initial brainstorming sessions to overcoming writer's block, to harmonizing and collaborating with the choir members, and finally, to hearing her piece harmoniously performed on stage. Sounds pretty ordinary for a musician, right?

But, what makes this essay unique would be her reflection on the process. Rather than focusing on the final performance (the cliche peak moment), she emphasizes the process of creation itself. She discusses her struggles during the composition process, the isolation she felt not being able to express her ideas fully, the moment she doubted her abilities, and the pressure of satisfying everyone with the final outcome.

Within that journey, she found that music isn't just about perfect harmonies or grand performances; it's about telling a story, expressing emotions, being vulnerable, and sharing a part of yourself. It's about patience and resilience, work ethics and collaboration, leadership and responsibility. By the end, she had created more than a music piece; she had grown as a person.

Remember, it's not just about the experience; it's about how you grew from it and how it shaped you. Make sure the example you choose truly illustrates your unique story and growth, both musically and as a whole person.

I hope you find this guidance helpful!

a year ago

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