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Essay on a memorable moment from college days?

If I wanted to write my personal statement on a memorable moment from high school (I haven't really had college days yet), what kind of moment would be impactful? Has anyone done this before?

a year ago

When choosing a moment for your statement, it is recommended to select a specific story that reflects growth, personal development, or a deepened understanding of yourself or the world around you. The moment should bring out your character, values, and motivations while simultaneously acting as a vehicle to discuss your aspirations.

One impactful method is to discuss overcoming an obstacle or a challenge. However, remember to focus closely on your actions, the steps you took to address the issue, and how it shaped you rather than dwelling too much on the problem itself. This approach does not necessarily imply a tragic or negative scenario—it could be an intellectual or artistic challenge, a project you spearheaded, or an initiative you took to create change in your community.

Alternatively, you could write about a moment of realization or self-discovery. Perhaps there was an instance where your perspective shifted significantly – it could revolve around an academic subject, a social issue, an understanding of your identity, or your aspirations for the future.

Lastly, positive experiences such as spearheading a successful event, contributing to a successful team project, or achieving a personal milestone can also serve as compelling narratives.

What's important is to avoid common tropes and make your essay personal and unique to your experiences. The most effective narratives are those that show a deep insight or transformation. A well-chosen anecdote might be something seemingly ordinary that tells colleges something uniquely meaningful about you.

Remember to demonstrate progress and growth. By the end of your essay, you should evidence some change or development, demonstrating that you are not the same person at the end of your story as you were at the beginning.

a year ago

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