Hey guys! I'm working on my college application essays and I'm trying to 'stand out'. Can you share any examples of eye-catching, and interesting college essays or prompts that you've come across?
Absolutely! It's important to remember that what makes a college essay interesting and effective is often not only the subject matter, but also how you present it. I once read an essay that used a student's interest in origami as a metaphor for their outlook on problem-solving. The student described their process of folding a particularly complex paper dragon, detailing the commitment, patience, and creative thinking it required. Each fold symbolized a different aspect of their personality or life experience.
The essay was not only engaging because of its unique topic, but also because it revealed so much about the student's character, their ability to overcome challenges, and their approach to learning and growth—all important qualities that colleges look for. It made a relatively common hobby (like origami) seem fascinating, and allowed for a deep dive into a personal story.
Another unusual but effective essay I recall involved a student who worked part-time at a fast food restaurant. As a simple employee, the student detailed how they implemented a more efficient system for calling out orders, resulting in faster service times, and learned first-hand business operations and customer service strategies. It effectively demonstrated entrepreneurial spirit, initiative, and a willingness to learn and grow even in seemingly ordinary circumstances.
So as you're thinking about what to write, consider aspects of your own life or experiences that could give colleges an insightful glimpse into who you are. These might include hobbies, the way you overcame certain challenges, a meaningful conversation, or any impactful experiences you had. The key is to reflect on these experiences and express what they say about you and your abilities.
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