Just gearing up for college apps and I've hit a roadblock at the part where I have to talk about the accomplishment I'm most proud of. Could you guys share some examples of accomplishments you wrote about for your apps? It would really help me brainstorm some ideas!
Sure, one common example (without giving too much personal detail) could be a student who led a community service project that made a meaningful change. Let me illustrate this with an example:
This student was passionate about environmental conservation and noticed their local community park was being littered regularly and was not properly maintained. They made it their mission to improve the park and gathered a team of volunteers from their school. They organized park clean-ups, advocated for better waste disposal options, and worked with the city council to plant new trees. The project spanned over two years, and during this period, they managed to reduce litter in the park, increase community awareness about the environment, and introduce more greenery to the park through their tree-planting initiative.
When writing about this accomplishment, the students didn't just focus on what they achieved, but they also talked about their passion for environmentalism, their leadership skills, problem-solving ability, persistence, and ability to bring people together for a common cause. These are qualities that colleges highly value.
Is this the only type of accomplishment you could write about? No! The accomplishment could be related to academic success, personal development, or overcoming adversity. It could be as simple as finally understanding a challenging concept in calculus after weeks of struggling, or as big as starting a successful small business, or even as personal as overcoming stage fright to give a speech in a debate competition. The important thing is not the scale of the achievement itself, but rather the skills, growth, and personal qualities you demonstrate through your response.
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