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What should I cover in a personal essay for my applications?

To anyone who’s written a personal essay for their college application: what did you focus on? I’m trying to find that balance between being genuine and being impressive. If you have any tips or personal experiences, I’d really appreciate it!

7 months ago

Navigating the personal statement can be like walking a tightrope, but balance is definitely key. A standout essay usually comes from the heart and reflects something truly personal about you. Write about what makes you uniquely you, whether it’s a specific experience that shaped you or a passion that drives you. Colleges are looking for depth over breadth here. They want to see self-awareness, personal growth, or an understanding of the world around you.

For example, instead of listing your achievements, tell a story that illustrates your character and values. An impactful moment or a meaningful interaction can provide a glimpse into who you are beyond your grades and test scores. Consider describing how you overcame a particular challenge or what you learned from a failure. Remember, authenticity is compelling, so be honest and reflective. And finally, don’t shy away from showcasing your voice and style, as long as it is appropriate for a formal application. Good luck!

7 months ago

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