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Does anyone have Common App sample essays that demonstrate a strong voice or unique perspective?

I'm trying to understand what practices make a Common App essay memorable. If you're comfortable sharing, I'd love to see some sample essays that got you or someone you know into a great school, especially essays that showed a strong personal voice or a unique perspective on a common topic. Just trying to get a feel for what takes an essay from good to great. Cheers!

7 months ago

I completely understand your quest for finding that special spark that makes a college essay stand out. Here are some top examples that can help: https://blog.collegevine.com/common-app-essay-examples

And here are some tips for writing a strong essay:

First, essays with a strong and authentic voice are typically introspective, where the writer does more than just narrate an event—they reflect deeply on its significance. Remember, an essay is a chance to offer insights into who you are beyond grades and test scores.

One powerful tactic is starting with a captivating hook—a question, a bold statement, or an engaging anecdote to draw the reader in immediately.

Another aspect is focusing on sensory details and vivid descriptions to create a 'world' for the reader, making your story come alive. Incorporate emotions and thoughts, not just actions, to convey depth.

Finally, a unique perspective can often stem from an ordinary situation, approached with introspection and an unconventional angle. Think of a mundane event but delve into why it was transformative for you and how it reshaped your outlook. Start with self-reflection and let your authenticity shine through. Best of luck with your writing process!

7 months ago

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