Hey, I'm struggling a bit to understand what exactly colleges are looking for in the supplemental essays. Does anyone know where I can look at some successful examples? I learn best by example and would greatly appreciate the help!
Hello there! It's completely understandable to seek out examples as a benchmark for your own writing. Successful supplemental essays often reflect a candidate's deep knowledge of and personal alignment with a college's values, culture, and programs.
CollegeVine has great essay examples from real students at dozens of schools: https://www.collegevine.com/category/essays/essay-examples
Also, think about how your essay can enhance what the admissions counselors know about you from the rest of your application; you want to avoid repeating information and instead focus on offering new insights into who you are.
As you look at examples, pay attention to how each writer uniquely presents their story and connects it to the specific college or program they're addressing. Remember, your essay is an opportunity to show why you would be a great fit for that school in a way that only you can. Best of luck in your writing process!
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