Examples of Letters of Continued Interest?

Hey all, unfortunately I was waitlisted at my dream school... I heard I should send a 'Letter of Continued Interest', but I have no clue where to start. Anyone come across any good examples?

A Letter of Continued Interest (LOCI) is a fantastic way to demonstrate your interest and enthusiasm for a school if you've been waitlisted. It gives you the chance to update the college about any recent accomplishments or developments since your application, and remind them of your strong desire to attend their school. Here's an example structure that might help:

Dear [Admissions Officer's Name if known],

I am writing to express my continued interest in [college name]. I was recently placed on your waitlist and now wish to reaffirm my deep desire to attend [college name]. While I understand that there are many qualified candidates, I kindly request you to then consider my application the moment a spot becomes available.

Since applying to [college name], I have continued to be involved in school activities and broaden my academic achievements. [Here you can list any significant accomplishments since your application was submitted. Maybe you raised your grades, started a new project, won an award, or anything else that highlights your strength as a candidate. Make sure to connect these accomplishments back to the college, highlighting how your actions align with the college's values or how you plan to contribute to the campus community.]

[Next, emphasize your fit with the university and provide some evidence. For instance, if you recently attended a virtual event hosted by the college, participated in an online course it offered, or had a meaningful conversation with an alumnus/alumna, you could mention that, discussing what you learned about the university and why it solidified your interest.]

I am completely committed to [college name] and its [mention specific programs, faculty, or opportunities that appeal to you]. If offered admission, I would accept without hesitation. I sincerely appreciate your reconsideration of my application and look forward to potentially joining the incoming class of [year].

Kind regards,

[Your full name, application number if applicable]

Remember, the letter needs to be heartfelt and original. It is better to keep the letter to a page and always proofread carefully! Be truthful, show passion, and demonstrate you're an applicant who would add value to the school's community.