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What's crucial to include in a personal statement for colleges?

Starting to freak out a bit over here. How do I decide what to put in my personal statement? There's so much I could say, but I don't know what admissions officers are looking for. Any advice on what elements are essential?

a year ago

I understand that writing your personal statement can feel overwhelming, but try to see it as an opportunity to showcase who you are beyond your grades and test scores. Admissions officers are looking to understand your character, your passions, and how you've grown or overcome challenges.

A crucial element is your 'spike' or what makes you stand out—this could be an intellectual interest, a talent, or a unique experience that has shaped you. Instead of trying to cover too much, focus on a defining moment or ongoing activity that illuminates your personality and values.

Also, make sure to craft a narrative that is genuine and in your own voice. Avoid generic topics unless you have a very unique angle on them, and proofread meticulously to avoid typos or grammar errors. Remember, this is your chance to make a personal connection with the admissions committee, so make it count by sharing something truly meaningful about yourself.

For example, if you have a passion for environmental activism, instead of just listing your achievements, you can share a story about a specific initiative you led and the impact it had on your community and yourself.

a year ago

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