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How to tackle scholarship essays about yourself?

Hey everyone, I'm gearing up to apply for scholarships, and many seem to require essays where you talk about yourself. Writing about myself feels kind of awkward, and I'm not entirely sure what these committees are looking for. For those who've had to write similar essays, do you have any advice on how to approach these?

I'm worried about coming off as either too boastful or too humble. How do you find that balance? Also, are there any specific aspects of your life, experiences, or achievements that are more appealing in these types of essays? Any guidance or resources that helped you would be really appreciated!

8 months ago

When writing scholarship essays, it's helpful to remember the purpose: the scholarship committee wants to get to know you better, understand your values, aspirations, understand how you overcame challenges, and how you would use their funds for your education. With that in mind:

1. Show, don't tell. Try not just to list off your achievements or experiences, but to delve into what they meant to you and how they changed you. For instance, instead of just saying that you've been an active participant in the debate club, share a meaningful debate experience and what you learned from it. Did it make you more confident in public speaking? Did it change how you research and evaluate issues?

2. Highlight Your Individuality. One of the main things that committees are looking for is what makes you unique. Don't forget to lean into the aspects of your life that make you stand out and connect back to your larger goals and attributes.

3. Be positive and forward-thinking. Committees often look for individuals who are hopeful and driven. They want to feel that their scholarship will have a positive impact. While you can talk about challenges you've faced, ensure that you highlight how you've grown from them and how they shaped your future ambitions.

4. Use Personal Details. Personal anecdotes and vivid details can make an essay stand out among many. Using them not only helps engage the reader but it also demonstrates your personality and makes your essay more personal and unique.

5. Address the Prompt and Tie it Back to Your Goals: Make sure you answer the essay prompt clearly and tie it back to your future education or career goals. If the prompt is asking you about a time you displayed leadership, tie that past experience to how it will make you a better leader in the future, whether in your chosen field of study or in a specific career path.

6. Maintain Balance: To find the balance between being boastful or too humble, focus on being truthful and sincere. Share your accomplishments but also articulate the process - the hard work put into it, the struggle, and the perseverance. This shows humility and resilience.

Remember, you're not just sharing your life story. You're persuading a committee that you're the best candidate for their scholarship. Think of this as an opportunity to demonstrate why you deserve the financial assistance and what distinct contributions you will make to your field with their aid. Your authenticity, determination, and unique perspective are what will make you appealing in these types of essays. Make sure to revise, ask for feedback when needed, and polish your essay to the best it can be. Good luck!

8 months ago

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