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What's the best way to write a winning scholarship essay?

I'm trying to get a head start on writing scholarship essays since I know they'll be a big task in senior year. I've heard that having a great essay can really make a difference, but I'm not sure how to make mine stand out. What are some tips for writing scholarship essays that grab the reader's attention and improve my chances of winning? Are there any do's and don'ts that fellow students have learned from experience? I could really use some advice from people who have successfully navigated this part of the college application process.

a year ago

Sure, there are definitely some strategies you can use to make your scholarship essays more compelling. First off, don't be ambiguous or general in your essays. Be specific. Tell a unique story that only you can tell. This could be an experience, a realization, or a moment of change in your life. Scholarships are looking for individuals—not generic students.

Just as with college application essays, avoid cliché topics and structures. Simply stating your accomplishments or extracurricular activities won’t cut it — that's resume material. Your essay should reveal more about your personality and how you view the world, not just what you've done.

Also, it's crucial to know your audience. Different scholarships are looking for different things—some may want a focus on leadership, while others may appreciate a commitment to community service. Be sure to understand the mission and purpose of the scholarship to align your essay accordingly.

And, of course, proofread! Incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes can distract from your story and diminish the credibility of your application. A clean, polished essay sends the message that you're serious about your application and that you've put thought into your response.

But most importantly, make it meaningful. Make sure your essay has a clear theme or message that ties it all together. This is what transforms a good essay into a great one.

In terms of a quick do's and don’ts list:

Do:

- Start early so you have time to revise and refine

- Answer the prompt fully and clearly

- Be genuine and use your own voice

- Illustrate your points with personal examples

Don't:

- Try to tackle too many topics or ideas at once

- Use overly formal or complicated language

- Submit an essay with typos or grammatical errors

- Write a generic essay that could apply to any applicant

I hope this helps and best of luck with your applications!

a year ago

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