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Need advice on writing a compelling goals essay

I'm in the process of applying for colleges and scholarships, and it seems like every other application asks for some sort of goals essay. I want to make sure mine stands out and really reflects who I am, but I'm not exactly sure where to start. If you've had success with writing goals essays or have any tips on structuring them, I'd love to hear about it. Any advice on what colleges or scholarship committees are looking for in a goals essay would be super helpful!

8 months ago

Absolutely, I'd be happy to help you make your goals essay more compelling. Start by being specific. Your goals, whether they are short-term or long-term, should be specific and grounded. Instead of writing "I want to help people", write about the specific ways you'd like to accomplish that, whether it is "I want to alleviate poverty in underprivileged rural communities by implementing sustainable agricultural systems."

Next, ensure that your goals are connected with the college or scholarship you apply for. Highlighting the specific programs, features, or opportunities the college or scholarship offers that will help you achieve your goals makes your essay more compelling and shows you've done your homework.

Don't forget to also include why these goals are important to you. The best goals essays explain not just what the goals are, but why they matter. This is your chance to show your values, passion, and individuality. Do you have a personal story related to your goal? Be sure to include it.

As for the structure, start by outlining your short-term and long-term goals. Then detail why these goals matter to you, followed by how you plan to achieve them, and how that specific college or scholarship can help.

Don't be afraid to show ambition, but also remember to be realistic in what you hope to accomplish. Lastly, tailor each essay to the specific college or scholarship you're applying to as much as possible. It's fine to use a similar base for multiple essays, but adjusting some details to fit the particular institution can make your essay stand out.

Writing a great goals essay can require some self-reflection and drafts. Don't worry if it doesn't come out perfect at first, the key is to continue refining until you touch on all the points you want to address. Good luck!

8 months ago

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