What makes a good college scholarship essay?

I'm in the process of writing scholarship essays and want to make them stand out. Any advice on what elements a really strong essay should include? How personal should I get with my stories?

Responding as a private admissions counselor:

Writing a successful scholarship essay is all about showcasing your strengths, your unique experiences, and your ambitions. Your essay should be well structured, engaging, and memorable. Here's a general guide to crafting a stellar scholarship essay:

1. Understand the Scholarship Goals: Make sure you understand what the scholarship committee values and what they are looking for in an applicant. Are they interested in students who have a demonstrated commitment to public service? Or perhaps they value academic achievement. Let their values guide your essay writing.

2. Select a Strong Topic: Choose a significant, personal, and meaningful topic that is relevant to the scholarship. In regard to your question about how personal to get with your stories - it's a balancing act. It's good to show vulnerability and personal experiences, as long as they tie back to the broader theme and purpose of the essay.

3. Create a Compelling Introduction: An engaging introduction that grabs the reader's attention is crucial. Whether it’s through a quote, a question, or a striking story, you want to make the reader want to continue.

4. Display Your Qualities: Show your positive qualities through stories and examples rather than simply stating them. For example, instead of saying "I am dedicated", demonstrate this by detailing the long hours you've put into a project or pursuit. Show, don’t tell.

5. Be Genuine: Authenticity is key. It's better to present your true self rather than who you think the scholarship committee wants to see. Committees are skilled at spotting essays that are embellished or not genuine.

6. Explain Why You Need the Scholarship: While you don’t want to come across as pleading or desperate, it’s okay to be honest about why you need the scholarship funds and what they would mean to you.

7. Proofread: Last but not least, ensure you read through your essay a few times to check for any grammar or spelling errors. It also helps to have someone else - a teacher, parent, mentor - review your work.

Think of your essay as a chance to introduce yourself to the scholarship committee. Best of luck!