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Tips for writing a high school cover letter for a job?

I'm applying for my first job while in high school and need to write a cover letter. Any advice on how to make it stand out? Should I focus more on my skills or my enthusiasm for the role?

a year ago

When writing a cover letter, especially for your first job, it's important to strike a balance between expressing your enthusiasm for the role and showcasing the skills you bring to the table. Here are few tips to guide you:

1. Personalization

Don't make your cover letter generic. If possible, find out the name of the hiring manager and address it to them directly. If you can’t find the name, using "Dear Hiring Manager" works fine too.

2. Introduction

Begin your cover letter with an introduction, stating the role you're applying for and where you learned about the job opportunity.

3. Express your enthusiasm

Remember, enthusiasm is contagious, and hiring managers appreciate applicants who are excited about their company and the role. Convey why you’re interested in the job and how it aligns with your future career plans.

4. Highlight relevant skills and experiences

Even though you're in high school, you probably have skills and experiences that are relevant to the job. This could be from school projects, clubs, sports, or volunteer work. For example, if you're applying for a retail job, you might talk about your experience handling money and interfacing with the public in your role as a treasurer for a club.

5. Showcase your potential

You may not have formal work experience, but you can still show potential employers that you're responsible, reliable, and eager to learn. You could mention extracurricular activities where you've demonstrated these traits or times when you've taken initiative to learn or do something new.

6. Employ the organization’s lingo

Look at the job description and the company's website. Use some of their language in your cover letter - it shows that you've done your research and are aligned with the company's mission.

7. Closing Paragraph

Wrap up with why you believe you're a good fit for the role, reiterate your enthusiasm, and express thanks for their consideration.

8. Proofread

Finally, don't forget to proofread your cover letter. Spelling or grammar mistakes could imply carelessness, which is the last impression you want to make on prospective employers.

Hope these tips help! Best of luck with your application!

a year ago

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