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What makes a strong BYU essay?

Hi all, I'm a junior working on my college essay drafts, and I want to make my BYU application essay stand out. Can anyone share examples or tips on writing a great BYU essay? I'm struggling with the prompt and need some inspiration. Thanks a lot!

a year ago

Hi there! It's fantastic that you're already working on your college essays. For a strong BYU essay, you'll want to focus on aligning your values and experiences with those of the institution. This means emphasizing your commitment to the LDS church, emphasizing your dedication to education and service, and showcasing your unique qualities.

Without knowing the specific prompt you're working on, it's hard to give tailored advice. However, here are some general tips:

1. Be sincere and authentic. Speak from your heart and share your personal experiences and feelings. Admissions officers can tell when a student is genuine.

2. Connect your experiences and values to BYU's mission and principles. Take some time to research the school and understand its culture and expectations; this will help you craft a more tailored essay.

3. Use anecdotes and examples to illustrate your points. Instead of simply listing your qualities or experiences, tell a story that showcases your values or experiences. This can make your essay more engaging and memorable.

4. Be mindful of your audience. Remember that BYU's admission readers are likely members of the LDS church. Be respectful and tactful in discussing your beliefs and experiences.

5. Edit and revise your essay multiple times. A polished essay will stand out among other applications, so take the time to make it the best it can be. Good luck!

a year ago

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