Hey guys, I'm getting ready to write my Common App essay and I'd like to read some examples of stellar essays that have worked for other people. Do any of you have any resources or recommendations? Thanks in advance!
Hey there! It's always a good idea to read some successful essays to help get a sense of what works and what doesn't. I have a few resources you might find helpful:
1. CollegeVine Essay Breakdowns: CollegeVine offers essay breakdowns that include actual essays submitted by students to top colleges. You'll find examples and detailed analysis of what works and what could be improved. Check their blog page for the essay breakdowns: https://blog.collegevine.com/category/essay-breakdown/
2. Johns Hopkins Essays That Worked: Johns Hopkins University has a dedicated webpage featuring a selection of essays that worked. This also includes short notes from the admissions committee on what stood out in each essay. You can find the examples here: https://apply.jhu.edu/application-process/essays-that-worked/
3. "50 Successful Harvard Application Essays": This book is a compilation of successful Harvard application essays and can be a great resource for examples. You can purchase the book on Amazon, or alternatively, you may be able to find some of the essays posted online.
Remember, when you're reading these essays, be mindful of what you can learn from them rather than attempting to replicate them. Your essay should be a reflection of your own experiences and personality. Take the time to brainstorm unique ideas and find your own voice as you draft your essay.
Good luck with your essay and the college application process!
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