Writing an email after an Early Decision 2 deferral?

I got deferred after applying Early Decision 2 and I'm planning to write an email to the admissions office. What should I include in it to boost my chances? Any tips for making it stand out?

Writing a letter of continued interest (LOCI) after a deferral can be a great way to reaffirm your commitment and to update the college on any significant accomplishments, growth, or developments since your initial application was submitted. Here are some tips and things to include:

1. Start by thanking the admissions office for considering your application and express your continued interest in the school. Be firm on this point that the school remains your top choice if accepted.

2. Update them on anything new and significant that has happened since you submitted your application, and isn't reflected in your application already. This could be an improvement in your GPA, new leadership roles, new awards, or other notable achievements.

3. Highlight your growth. You could discuss how you've made use of the time since you submitted your application, the lessons you've learned, or how you've challenged yourself.

4. Mention specifics about their college that continue to make it your top choice. Maybe you attended a virtual lecture that solidified your interest in a specific major or heard about a club or activity that aligns with your goals.

5. I wouldn't recommend simply asking the admissions office how to improve your application; rather, use the email to show how you have already worked on improvement.

6. Close by thanking them for their time and consideration, and by saying that you look forward to potentially joining the incoming class.

Remember that each email you send should be individually tailored to each college. Admissions officers will appreciate your continued interest and any updates that strengthen your application.

Finally, ensure that the letter is concise and free of typographical errors - it should be no more than a page long.