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Apply Texas Topic A Essay Examples?

Hey guys, I'm struggling to write my essay for Apply Texas Topic A. I was wondering if any of you could share examples or resources related to this topic to help me get started. Thank you so much!

7 months ago

Hi there! I understand that starting a new essay can be challenging. Luckily for you, CollegeVine does indeed have an example of a great ApplyTexas essay written in response to Topic A: https://blog.collegevine.com/applytexas-essay-examples. This blog post also contains analysis of what this essay did well and what could have been even better.

In terms of guidance to help you with your own response, here are a few tips to get you started:

1. Reflect on your experiences: Think about significant moments in your life, challenges you faced, or interests that have significantly influenced you. Choose one or two that you feel strongly about and will be able to write about in depth.

2. Pick a narrow, specific focus: Instead of trying to address several aspects of your background or interest, choose a narrower angle that truly highlights your uniqueness. For example, if you're passionate about environmental conservation, you might write about a specific project or experience that shaped your dedication to this cause, rather than speaking about your passion in a general, abstract sense.

3. Show, don't tell: Use detailed anecdotes, imagery, and sensory details to make your story come alive. Instead of just stating that you're a hard worker, describe a situation in which your work ethic was evident and explain the impact it had on you and others. This strategy will give your points much more weight.

4. Show growth and reflection: It's important not only to share your experiences but also to explain how they impacted you personally. Describe the lessons you learned, how you overcame challenges, and the way your perspectives changed as a result of your experiences.

5. Make it personal: Remember that the admissions officers are interested in who you are, so be sure to provide an authentic and genuine representation of yourself in your essay. Avoid cliché topics (https://blog.collegevine.com/cliche-college-essay-topics) or trying to write what you think they want to hear.

6. Utilize CollegeVine's resources: In addition to providing an example of a great ApplyTexas essay, CollegeVine has a blog post breaking down how to approach the prompt (https://blog.collegevine.com/how-to-write-the-applytexas-essays). Also, CollegeVine offers both a free peer essay review service and paid reviews by expert college admissions advisors. Sometimes, getting a second set of eyes on your essay is just the thing that takes it from good to great.

Best of luck with your essay, and feel free to ask any further questions you might have!

7 months ago

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