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Suggestions for improving essay vocab?

Hi all! So I'm revising my college essays right now, and I want to make sure I'm using some impressive vocabulary. What are your go-to words or phrases that you think make an essay sound more sophisticated? Any suggestions for finding a balance between sounding smart and not being too wordy? Thanks in advance!

a year ago

Hi there! It's essential to strike a balance between sophisticated vocabulary and clarity in your college essays. When enhancing your vocabulary, focus on words that add nuance and depth, without making the essay overly complex. I recommend using a thesaurus to look up synonyms for overused words but always double-check the meaning and connotation before adding it to your essay.

Some words and phrases that can elevate your essay include:

1. Ephemeral (fleeting, short-lived)

2. Nuance (subtle difference)

3. Resilient (able to recover quickly)

4. Auspicious (favorable)

5. Ambivalence (mixed feelings or contradictory ideas)

However, while adding impressive vocabulary is a good idea, ensure that it doesn't sacrifice your essay's readability. Here are a few tips for finding that balance:

1. Maintain your unique voice while incorporating advanced vocabulary. This helps you stay genuine while appearing articulate.

2. Use complex words only when necessary. Overdoing it can make your essay feel contrived.

3. Stay away from using obscure or rarely used words that might confuse the reader. Remember that clarity should always be your top priority.

4. Read your essay out loud to test how it flows, and ask a trusted friend or family member for feedback on whether it sounds natural.

To build up your vocabulary, immerse yourself in different forms of writing. Read books, articles, and essays that use advanced language. As you come across interesting or unfamiliar words, note them down and try to incorporate them into your writing practice. Soon, you'll have a rich vocabulary to deploy in your essays.

Good luck with your revisions! Remember that the most important part of your essay is telling a compelling story that showcases your unique qualities. Vocabulary is just one of the tools to enhance your writing, but the content is still the key to a successful essay.

a year ago

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