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NYU Personal Statement Examples

I'm having a hard time writing my NYU personal statement. I'd really appreciate it if someone could share any successful personal statement examples to help give me an idea of what works for NYU admissions. Thank you so much!

6 months ago

It's important to remember that there is no perfect formula for a successful personal statement, as every student has a unique story to tell. To help you think about how to approach your NYU personal statement, I can provide you with a brief example and some general tips that you could use as a starting point.

Example:

Growing up in a single-parent household in Brooklyn, I often found refuge in the vibrant colors and lines of street art. NYC's graffiti culture became a canvas for me to explore my own identity, and eventually, I began transforming my sketches into grand murals on makeshift plywood walls. These walls not only became a medium through which I expressed my creativity but also a physical representation of the colorful and resilient community that raised me.

When Hurricane Sandy devastated my neighborhood, I was determined to turn the broken streets and devastated houses into heartfelt murals that evoked hope and unity. Partnering with local artists, we began our mural project, adding color to the gray, rebuilding landscape—one brushstroke at a time.

NYU's diversity and commitment to community engagement resonates with my passion for art and social impact. I am eager to pursue a degree in Fine Arts at NYU because it positions me at the epicenter of a living, breathing art gallery where every corner reveals a new story carved into the city's walls. I am excited to further hone my skills at NYU's world-renowned art facilities and collaborate with like-minded students who have an unwavering passion for using art as a tool for social change.

Remember that your personal statement should be a reflection of your own journey and unique experiences, so take this example as a guide, but be true to yourself when crafting your statement. Good luck!

6 months ago

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