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NHS acceptance essay?

Hey everyone, I'm working on my NHS acceptance essay and I'm feeling a bit lost. Does anyone have any tips for what I should include or focus on in the essay? Thanks in advance!

11 months ago

Hi! First, congrats on your National Honor Society (NHS) nomination; it's a great accomplishment! For your NHS essay, keep in mind that the four main pillars of NHS are scholarship, leadership, service, and character. Your essay should address these pillars and provide specific examples about how you've embodied and demonstrated them in your daily life.

1. Scholarship: Briefly mention your academic achievements, such as a strong GPA, rigorous coursework, or any academic awards you've received. Remember to explain how this dedication to your studies aligns with the NHS values.

2. Leadership: Discuss any leadership roles you've taken on at school or within your community. This can be your role as a club president, team captain, or even a project lead in a volunteer activity. Explain the impact your leadership has made on others and what skills you've gained.

3. Service: Showcase your commitment to helping others and the community by discussing your volunteer experiences, community service, or any other service-oriented activities you've participated in. Be specific about the impact you've made and how these experiences have shaped your character.

4. Character: Touch on your personal values, ethics, and qualities that reflect a strong character. You can discuss things like consistently demonstrating honesty, willingness to take responsibility for your actions, and being a role model for your peers.

Throughout your essay, be authentic and personal in your storytelling. Write about genuine experiences that have shaped you and what you have learned from them. Avoid clichés and focus on experiences that demonstrate your growth and commitment to embodying NHS values.

Lastly, ensure your essay is well organized, with each paragraph focusing on a specific pillar, and proofread your essay for grammar and clarity. Here's an example of an NHS essay if you want more inspiration: https://blog.collegevine.com/national-honor-society-essay.

Good luck with your NHS essay!

11 months ago

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