Hey everyone! I'm working on my UC application and was curious if anyone knew where I could find example essays from students who were accepted to UCLA. I want to get a feel for what they're looking for in the personal insight questions. Thanks in advance!
Hi there! It's great that you're looking to get a feel for what UCLA might be looking for in the personal insight questions. While I can't share specific essays from students who were accepted to UCLA, I can direct you to a resource that can help you in your writing process. CollegeVine offers a free Essay Breakdown guide for the UC schools, which includes advice on how to approach each personal insight question and some sample essays.
Although it's helpful to see examples, remember that every student's story is unique and what works for one person might not work for another. Use the examples as inspiration, but focus on your own experiences and voice. Be genuine, specific, and reflective in your essays.
Additionally, you can ask your school counselor, peers, or even look for writing workshops or resources in your community to get feedback on your essays. While it's useful to get some ideas from essays written by accepted students, it's essential to stay true to yourself and present your own experiences, achievements, and personality in your responses. Good luck with your UC application!
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