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Transition words for personal essays?

Hi everyone! I'm currently writing my personal essay for college applications, and I'm having a little trouble with smooth transitions between paragraphs. What are some good transition words or phrases that you've used in your personal essays?

2 years ago

Hello! To create smooth transitions in your personal essay, it's essential to choose appropriate transition words or phrases that convey the relationship between ideas or events. Here are several categories of transitions you may find helpful:

1. Addition/Elaboration: To provide further information or expand on a point

- Furthermore

- In addition

- Moreover

- Similarly

- For instance

- For example

2. Cause/Effect: To show a causal relationship

- Consequently

- As a result

- Thus

- Therefore

- Hence

3. Contrast/Comparison: To draw a distinction or emphasize a similarity

- However

- On the other hand

- Conversely

- Yet

- Nevertheless

- Despite this

- In contrast

- On the contrary

- Likewise

- In the same way

4. Time/Sequence: To order events, ideas, or points in time

- First, Second, Third

- Next

- Before

- After

- Earlier

- Later

- Meanwhile

- Eventually

5. Summary/Conclusion: To sum up or wrap up your essay

- In conclusion

- To summarize

- In summary

- Ultimately

- Overall

When incorporating these transition words or phrases, be sure to consider how they best fit within your essay context, enhance the flow, and maintain the narrative's tone. Remember, the key is to maintain the story's coherence without disrupting the natural progression. Good luck with your personal essay!

2 years ago

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