Appealing admission decision - anyone have a sample?

Hey guys, so I was rejected from my top choice college and I'm considering writing an appeal letter. Has anyone here successfully appealed an admissions decision and would you be willing to share your sample letter? Thanks!

Hey there! I can definitely understand wanting to pursue an appeal for your top choice college. While I can't provide you with a specific sample letter, I can give you some key pointers on how to write an effective appeal letter. Remember, though, that the chances of having a decision overturned are generally quite slim, so it's important to set realistic expectations.

1. Start with a proper salutation and introduction: Begin by addressing the appropriate person, usually the Dean of Admissions or the Admissions Committee. In the introduction, be polite and express your gratitude for the time they spent reviewing your application.

2. Include new and compelling information: Your appeal should focus on presenting significant new information that wasn't part of your original application and clearly demonstrates why you deserve a second review. This could include recent accomplishments, awards, or other updates that showcase your suitability for the college. Remember, they've already spent time and energy on your original application, so you don't want to waste their time - rather, tell them something genuinely new that could substantively change their evaluation of you as an applicant.

3. Be concise and to-the-point: Keep your letter concise and focused, ideally not exceeding one page. Eliminate any fluff and get straight to the point, by emphasizing the new information you're providing and how it reflects positively on you as a candidate.

4. Maintain a respectful tone: Throughout your letter, remember that admissions officers are professionals who have already carefully evaluated your application. Show respect for their expertise and avoid sounding confrontational or blaming them for their decision.

5. Conclude graciously: Finally, end your letter with a brief expression of gratitude for their time and consideration, a restatement of your desire to attend the college, and an open-ended conclusion that invites dialogue or further discussion.

If possible, try having someone trustworthy and knowledgeable (a teacher, parent, etc.) review your letter and provide feedback before submitting it. And again, keep in mind that appealing an admissions decision is typically unlikely to be successful, no matter how strong your letter is, so it's wise to plan for other options simultaneously as you write your letter.

Best of luck with your appeal!