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Need examples of successful college application essays

Hey guys! I'm working on my college applications and I'm struggling a bit with my essays. Can anyone share some links or resources where I can find examples of successful college application essays? I want to see what a winning essay looks like so I can learn and improve my own. Thanks!

2 years ago

Hey there! I understand the struggle of trying to craft a standout college essay. Reading successful essays is a great way to gain insights and gather inspiration. Here are a few resources with examples of successful college application essays that you can check out:

1. CollegeVine's Essay Guides: CollegeVine offers a series of essay guides to dozens of colleges. You can also find essay analysis and example responses to help you better understand how applicants have effectively tackled the prompts. Access these examples at: https://www.collegevine.com/category/essays/essay-examples

2. The New York Times: They annually publish a collection of college essays that caught their attention. You can find these collections under their "Essays That Worked" series. Simply search for "The New York Times essays that worked" on Google to find the articles.

3. Books: There are several books available that compile successful college essays, providing you with insights into a variety of topics, styles, and tones. Some popular titles include "50 Successful Harvard Application Essays" and "Fiske Real College Essays That Work” by Edward B. Fiske.

4. College websites: Many colleges, like Johns Hopkins University and Connecticut College, showcase essays from admitted students to give you an idea of successful essays for their specific institutions. You can usually find these on their admissions or undergraduate blogs.

Remember, while reviewing successful essays can be helpful, it's important to make your essay unique to your experiences and voice. Use these examples as inspiration, but be sure to inject your own personality and insights into your essay. Good luck with your writing process!

2 years ago

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