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Sharing college essay examples?

Have any of you guys been through the college application process and willing to share your own college essay examples? I could really use some inspiration, and it would be helpful to see successful essays other people have written. Just want to get a better idea of what works and what doesn't.

2 years ago

It's really great that you're looking for inspiration and trying to see what works for successful college essays! While I don't have personal ones to share, I would recommend checking out CollegeVine's essay examples section of their blog (https://www.collegevine.com/category/essays/essay-examples). They have hundreds of examples that range from general personal statements to school-specific supplements that I know countless students have found useful.

As you read various examples, take note of the writing style, structure, and content. Look at what made these essays stand out and think about how you could apply similar techniques to your own essay. Ultimately, the key to a successful application essay is to present yourself authentically, share your genuine experiences and perspectives, and captivate your audience with a compelling narrative.

Best of luck with your essay writing process!

2 years ago

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