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Example of a Well-Written College Essay

Hi guys! I'm kind of stressed about writing my college essays and I'm looking for examples of really well-written essays as a guide. Can someone point me in the right direction for finding some?

2 years ago

Hello! It's completely normal to feel stressed about writing college essays, and looking for inspiration can be very helpful. One great source for examples of well-written essays is the CollegeVine website, which has a blog featuring various essay analyses and some successful examples.

These analyses provide context and guidance on what worked well in each essay, so they can be an invaluable resource as you craft your own. You can find these articles here: https://www.collegevine.com/category/essays/essay-examples

In terms of specific essays, an example that comes to mind is "Costco Essay," which was written by a student who was admitted to multiple Ivy League universities. The essay is about the student's experiences in a Costco store and how she equates her love for exploration and curiosity with her passion for learning. This essay is unique because it takes an everyday experience and turns it into a compelling narrative that showcases the student's personality.

Remember, as you read essay examples, it's essential not to copy the ideas or stories but to use them as a starting point to brainstorm your own experiences and perspective. Focus on finding a unique angle and genuine voice that showcases your personality and passions. Most importantly, draft and revise multiple times and seek feedback from others to help perfect your writing.

Best of luck in your essay writing process!

2 years ago

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