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What should I avoid in my college essay?

Hi everyone! I've read a lot of advice on what to include in my college essay, but I'm not sure what to avoid. Are there any topics or writing styles that I should steer clear of to make my essay as strong as possible?

10 months ago

Hello! It's great that you're thinking about what to avoid in your college essay. There are definitely some topics and writing styles to steer clear of to make your essay strong. Here are a few tips:

1. Avoid clichés and overused topics, like a sports injury, mission trips, or the 'big game.' Admissions officers read thousands of essays, so try to pick a unique and personal topic that will stand out.

2. Steer clear of controversial topics or polarizing issues, as you don't want to risk alienating the person reading your essay.

3. Don't be too negative or focus solely on hardships. It's important to show growth and resilience, but make sure your essay has a positive and uplifting tone overall.

4. Avoid using overly complex vocabulary or writing in a style that doesn't sound like you. It's best to write in your own voice and be genuine.

5. Finally, don't try to fit in too many different ideas. Focus on one main story or theme that will leave a lasting impression on the reader.

I hope these tips help you create a strong and memorable essay! Good luck!

10 months ago

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