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How personal should my college essay be?

I've heard that college essays should be personal, but I'm not sure how much detail I should include. Is there a line between being open and oversharing? I want to make sure I strike the right balance.

9 months ago

It's great that you're thinking about finding the right balance in your college essay! The key to a successful essay is to be genuine and share a story that reflects your personality and values, while also demonstrating your growth and ability to think deeply about your experiences.

It's important to strike a balance between being open and maintaining appropriate boundaries. Oversharing can make your essay seem unprofessional, while being too reserved can make it difficult for the admissions committee to understand who you are as a person.

One way to approach this is to focus on a specific event or experience that had a significant impact on your life, and then discuss how it shaped your perspective, goals, or character. This allows you to share something personal without diving too deep into sensitive topics or revealing too much about your private life.

For example, my child wrote about a volunteering experience that taught them the value of empathy and community involvement. This allowed them to convey their passion for helping others without disclosing too much personal information.

Remember, the goal of your essay is to provide the reader with a glimpse into your life, so choose a topic that showcases your unique qualities while still maintaining a level of professionalism. Good luck!

9 months ago

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