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Should I write about a personal struggle for my college essay?

Hey everyone, I'm starting to work on my college essays and I'm considering writing about a personal struggle I've been through. However, I'm worried it might come across as too negative or oversharing. What are your thoughts on this topic and do you have any suggestions for how to approach it effectively? Thanks in advance!

9 months ago

It's great that you're thinking critically about your college essay topic! Writing about a personal struggle can actually be a powerful and insightful choice, as long as you approach it thoughtfully. The key is to focus on how you've grown or what you've learned from the experience, rather than dwelling on the negativity or hardships themselves.

For example, you could talk about how you've developed resilience, empathy, or perspective because of the struggle you've faced. Keep the tone optimistic and highlight the positive outcomes of your journey. This way, you can avoid oversharing or sounding too negative to the admissions officers. Balance is important in these essays, so try to be authentic and honest while showing your growth.

Good luck with your essay!

9 months ago

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