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Feeling so average, how do I write a college essay that stands out?

Just a junior here feeling pretty average compared to the amazing things I read about other applicants. I’ve got decent grades and some extracurriculars, but nothing groundbreaking. How do I spin this into a college essay that can still stand out? I just don’t want to be another application they skim over.

a year ago

Hi there! Please remember that your personal essay is your chance to shine in ways that can't be captured by your grades and test scores. A compelling essay often focuses on a singular moment, story, or defining characteristic about you, and the strength of the essay is all about how you tell your story.

Think about a time when you faced a challenge, or a moment that might seem small but changed the way you think about something. How did you handle it, and what did you learn about yourself? For example, maybe you have a hobby that taught you about dedication and patience—these are qualities that colleges value. Also, consider what makes your perspective unique, because even if you feel 'average', your life experiences are yours alone. There may be something you don't think of as being special, but that in reality is quite unique to you. So, don't be afraid to write about seemingly mundane experiences if they mean a lot to you, as reflecting on something with depth and insight, whatever that thing is, will speak well of your maturity and readiness to engage with a college environment.

Lastly, consider doing some brainstorming with friends, family members, coaches, teachers, or anyone else who knows you well and may be able to help you figure out what makes you tick. Once you have a working draft, they can also help you hone your voice and ensure your essay resonates. Best of luck, and remember that authenticity is key!

a year ago

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