Hello! I'm currently writing a 'Why us?' essay for one of my college applications and I'm kind of stuck on how to end it. Should I focus more on how the college benefits me or how I could contribute to the college?
Hi there! It's fantastic that you're tackling your 'Why us?' essay – it's a key component of your application. In wrapping up your essay, think of it like a closing argument. It's your final opportunity to make a compelling case for the synergy between you and the school. Balance is key here. Emphasize not only how the college fits your academic and personal aspirations but also touch on how you envision contributing to the campus community. For example, if you have a strong background in community service and the college has a robust volunteer program, you could end by saying something like, 'I'm excited for the opportunity to join [college’s volunteer program], where I can apply my passion and experience in community service, enriching both my own life and those I serve.' This approach allows you to highlight your strengths while tying them directly to what the college offers. Remember, admissions officers are looking for students who will take full advantage of the opportunities at their school and who will also add value to their community. Good luck with your essay!
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