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Trust doesn’t usually break all at once. For me, it unraveled. It was supposed to be a routine day. I was just going to the store with my dad to get a crabbing license. I didn’t have an account, and he hadn't updated his in years, so the gentleman behind the counter had to ask a bunch of questions. We finished my account in a breeze, and then it was my dad’s turn. “Have you ever committed a felony?” The gentleman asked. My dad asked him to repeat the question. I chimed in jokingly, “He’s asking if you’re a felon.”...