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Am I a good candidate for competitive colleges despite my initial and uncontrollable impediments?
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Saying that I had a head-start to high school is rather fallacious, in my opinion.

I was placed into child protective state custody near the end of the summer of 8th grade year, and just in time for the beginning of my freshman year! Shortly thereafter, as my state's child custody system does so perfectly, I was transferred to a placement with one of the worst educational environments I've witnessed. The point being that there was essentially no rigor, and I could not choose my classes.

This was only for first semester, though, and I was able to attend my originally planned high school for the whole second semester of freshman year — during which I took the most rigorous courses available to me.

Then, the state got involved again (of course), and I was once again transferred to 𝘵𝘩𝘦 worst educational environment I've ever been in. And, again, the point being that there was essentially no rigor, and I could not choose my classes therein.

Guess what, guys? You're not going to believe this: I was transferred again, subsequent of the placement mentioned in previous paragraph. Fortunately, this school was a relatively okay school. I could choose my classes, so I chose the hardest ones and even took the only summer course available.

Finally, at the end of sophomore year, after a coalescent total of 1 year and 1 semester away, I returned to my originally planned high school.

That's where I'm at right now, in my junior year. Things are going exceptionally well, now that I've been given the environment. Here is a list of my current statistics:

- 3.96 Unweighted GPA

- 35 ACT

- 1570 SAT

- 8 APs

- 7 Honors

- 3 College Courses

- 6 Credit Hours from Center for Advanced Professional Studies - Engineering

- Guiness World Record Holder | Largest Tuba Ensemble

- Varsity & Junior Varsity | Scholars Bowl

- Junior Varsity | Science Bowl

- Co-founder | Pickleball Club (Fun activities; non-profit; thousands of dollars raised)

- Senior Officer | Computer Science Club

- Officer | Model United Nations

- Officer | Sources of Strength (Mental health help group)

- Lifetime Member & Officer | Tri-M (National Music Honors Society)

- Senior Officer | Computer Science National Honors Society

- Honorable Alumni | BTNAA (Boys Town National Alumni Association)

- Member | National English Honors Society

- Member | National Spanish Honors Society

- Member | National History Honors Society

- Member | National Science Honors Society

- Member | Mu Alpha Theta (National Mathematics Honors Society)

- Member | Science Outreach (Show elementary school students cool science experiments)

- Member | DECA

- Member | Metal Mustang Robotics (State Championship)

- Member | Tiger Robotics

- Member | Students Assist Schools (Volunteering)

- Member | Investment Club

- Member | KAY Club (Youth leadership)

Sadly, however, I missed out on these things:

- AP European History

- Honors Spanish 4.0

Anyway, given this information, am I a good candidate for competitive colleges despite my impediments?

Also, thank you for taking the time to read this; there was just a significant amount of context too great to go unaddressed.

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3 years ago[edited]

You have done remarkably well for coming from such a messed up background through no fault of your own.

Explain something to me which I can't tell from your post. Are you living with a biological parent or are you still in the foster care service? Is your family low income, middle income or upper income? Do you attend a public HS or a private HS?

I have a couple advice points to make:

1. If you qualify, I would apply to Questbridge or Posse and/also a community service org. like Matriculate which helps high achieving low income students curate their academic narrative better to ensure they get picked up by top colleges. Questbridge has 2 programs, one for Juniors which you should apply to now, and one for Seniors, the college match program. The junior program helps high achieving students tighten up their narrative to prepare them to apply to the best 45 colleges. The Match program allows high achieving low income student to rank up to 12 colleges and if they get selected by the schools they ranked, they get a full ride 4 year scholarship from the university. This year nearly 1700 HS seniors were awarded match scholarships.

2. If you are not low income any longer, make sure you can find a mentor or counselor who can work with you for the rest of your school year and summer to get you cull down your activities and create some Spikes for your narrative. You have a lot of ECs but it's like an EC collection not a Spike pattern. So whatever it is that you are in love with or passionate about you should go full steam ahead with that. I don't know if that is robotics or music or engineering or marketing or investments. You can't be all things to all people. Colleges do not want well rounded people in general, they want a well rounded class. It makes sense and doesn't make sense. If you are well read and well rounded, just make sure you have some activities that make you a Stand Out either in Talent or Leadership.

3. My last point is somewhat of being a contrarian so take it with a grain of salt. If your goal is to get into an Ivy League College, a Elite College or a Top Liberal Arts college, I think right now, you are good candidate. But not the best candidate. I went to a top Public HS and there were like 30-40 kids who had your narrative in terms of grades, APs, ECs and community service. Even though my school was say top 3 in my state, less than 1% of the graduating class got into such schools. 5 or 10 years ago, that number might have be 5%. There is enormous competition these days from ALDCs and most ALDCs come from private boarding schools. (ALDC stand for recruited athletes, legacies, developments candidates (VIPS/$$$$)and children of faculty). At, say the Top 10 private boarding schools about 20% who apply to Ivys get in and about 25% who apply to Elites get in and perhaps 35% who apply to Top Liberal arts colleges get in. So in my radical thinking, if you can't beat them, join them. I think if you were to do a PG (Post Grad) GAP year at a top private boarding school you would greatly improve your chances and have a better curated academic record after 1 year there. Plus they are all well funded so low income and even middle income student can get a full ride if they are super smart like you. If I were you I would apply to say your 10 top college choices and then also apply to 5 top boarding schools as a back up plan. if you don't get into your college of choice, you can still get their by taking a GAP year at a boarding school. Since they are all run like private liberal arts colleges, it will be a much softer landing if than if you go from your environment straight into an Ivy. (If you are interested reply and I'll give you more info).

Good luck.

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3 years ago

I'm no admissions officer, and am just another senior in HS looking to apply, but in my opinion, your impediments and the living situation you describe almost serve more to help you in your college application processes than you think they would hurt. The amount of stuff that you have done is, in my opinion extremely impressive for a student who is privileged to live in a much better situation. My best advice is to keep your head up, and realize that this can help you more than it can hurt, because your level of accomplishment paired with the amount of things trying to weigh you down should provide alot for you to write (and yes, brag) about in your applications and your essays. Best of luck to you, and given what you've done so far I'm sure you'll do great, just make sure to avoid burnout!

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3 years ago

Hi @myrrh_and_gold!

I think you're doing very well. Your grades are near perfect — enough to clear the threshold at even the most selective schools — and you have a very impressive extracurricular list. You've also managed to accrue 8 AP courses, which is already more than most applicants (and more than many schools offer).

I wouldn't worry about not having taken AP Euro or Honors Spanish 4. Colleges simply expect you to take the best courses available to you (particularly in your major). So, it likely won't even register to an admissions officer that you don't have this specific AP class. Spanish 3 should also be enough to satisfy the people looking your transcript (again, I doubt they'll notice the absence of Honors Spanish 4).

Your extracurricular list is strong, but remember you can only list the top ten activities in the Common App. You'll have to adjust this list based on your intended major, but on first glance it looks very competitive. My only concern there is that there's not a clear, discernable spike — it's hard to tell what your main passion is, because your achievements are spread out in so many fields. You'll have to think of a way to connect your main activities (music, computer science, etc.) in your essays to give admissions officers a clear idea of what kind of student (and alumni) you'll be. But I wouldn't worry about that too much — you already have a lot to work with.

The last thing you'll need to do then is establish a personal narrative for admissions officers via your essays. I would try to convey your situation more through your personal statement than the additional info section of the Common App. Admissions officers will then contextualize your (already-impressive) academics and extracurriculars against your circumstances, which will only make them stand out more.

If you want further advice as to your chances at a specific school, I'd definitely recommend our chancing engine (https://www.collegevine.com/admissions-calculator). But overall, I think you're in good shape.

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3 years ago

Honestly, missing out on maybe two hard classes, won't affect your statistics that much. Your grade only takes you so far. Your extracurriculars take you the rest of the way. I would say you have a wide range of ecs but I don't see a spike, and I don't see big leadership roles, other than co-founding your own pickleball club, which is impressive. i think that you have a good shot at many top 30 schools for sure.

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3 years ago

You have taken an insane amount of classes and EC's with insanely good grades. These are the kind of grades that will definitely get you into top colleges. While you have endured a lot of school issues, I think that those will be looked at as an accomplishment rather than an impediment. If you would like to do anything better maybe take on some more rigorous leadership roles in order to show your dream school that you can be a leader, not just a member. Other than that I would almost guarantee that you can make it into one of the top colleges in the United States.

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