Dr. Jekyll and Hyde
Storyteller
Chapter One
The Door
John Utterson was a lawyer. He lived in London and seemed to be a cold man also without feeling. He never smiled. He only spoke when it was necessary. People liked him. There was shows something in his eyes that showed kindness. It showed his understanding the other people. Men and Women went to him about a lawyer to he helped them all. It all mattered who they were.
He lived in a quiet and simple place. He enjoyed the theater, and he does not like to visit anymore. There was a friend from his family and a very old friend from his old school.
There was Mr. Enfield, that other people could have no reason for Mr. Utterson and Mr. Richard Enfield to be friends. Me. Utterson was very quite different from Mr. Utterson and Mr. Richard Enfield. They were younger and used to go to the theatre, parties, and good restaurants.
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