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Hey everyone, I bet everyone is stressed out with admission being right around the corner (me too dw), but I just had some questions about the essay. Does anyone have any tips? Is it cliche to do a story on your childhood if it links back to why you want to do that degree plan? Also, is it better to do a College Application submission or a direct application? What is everyone writing their essays on?

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Hey! You’re definitely not alone—admissions season has everyone feeling the pressure, and it’s great that you’re thinking ahead. When it comes to the essay, the best tip is to be authentic. Admissions officers read thousands of essays, so yours will stand out if it’s personal, reflective, and shows growth. Start with a strong hook—maybe a vivid anecdote or a moment of realization—and make sure to connect your story to your academic goals. As for writing about your childhood, it’s not necessarily cliché if it’s done well. If the story is specific, meaningful, and clearly ties into why you’re pursuing that degree plan, it can be powerful. Just avoid vague statements like “I’ve always loved science” and instead focus on a moment that shaped your passion. Regarding the application method, the College Application (like Common App) is great if you’re applying to multiple schools—it streamlines the process and lets you reuse your main essay. Direct applications can be more tailored but often require more work. Check each school’s preferences to decide. As for essay topics, people write about everything from personal challenges and cultural identity to quirky hobbies and career inspirations. The key is to choose something that reveals who you are beyond your grades and test scores. If you’re still deciding on a topic, I’d be happy to help you brainstorm or give feedback on a draft. You’ve got this!

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This is absolutely the response. Clichés exist for a reason, after all. If you can be specific, paint a scene, and make the admissions officer feel something in your essay, then go for it! Admissions officers can sometimes lose interest very quickly with well-trodden topics, so make sure to catch their attention quickly! Good luck!

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Thank you so much! Your response was so detailed and is so helpful!! Thank you again!!

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Thank you!!!

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