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2 years ago
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Can any one help me to edit my Essay as i am very week at it,If you could do that for me it with be great gratitude

Editing my Essay

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2 years ago[edited]

The best suggestion I can make is to put your essay through the College Vine peer essay review. Depending on the demand, it may cost you 10 or 20 Karma for a review so just look at CV Peer Essay Review under the ESSAY ICON at the top of the menu bar on this website.

Good luck

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2 years ago

Do you have any friends/family members/teachers who could edit it for you? Their comments might be more helpful because you could ask them questions about their feedback.

Some things you can do: Make sure you use spellcheck/check your grammar. Google Docs and Word do well with spelling and grammar. Also, check your capitalization and punctuation. Those little things go a long way to making your essay seem more professional and coherent!!!

Good luck!

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2 years ago

Hey there! You can submit your essay to our peer review system to get quick feedback: https://www.collegevine.com/essays/review

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