Editing my Essay
The best suggestion I can make is to put your essay through the College Vine peer essay review. Depending on the demand, it may cost you 10 or 20 Karma for a review so just look at CV Peer Essay Review under the ESSAY ICON at the top of the menu bar on this website.
Do you have any friends/family members/teachers who could edit it for you? Their comments might be more helpful because you could ask them questions about their feedback.
Some things you can do: Make sure you use spellcheck/check your grammar. Google Docs and Word do well with spelling and grammar. Also, check your capitalization and punctuation. Those little things go a long way to making your essay seem more professional and coherent!!!
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