I was wondering if you would be willing to take a look at my Common App Activties and tell me what you think at first impression. If you think I show leadership, commitment, and accomplishment, on there.
1. Football( Led JV/Freshman team during games, ran practices, motivated team to win, and promoted positive attitude. Varsity Athlete 11th and 12th grades)
Hrs a Week: 14
Weeks per year: 42
Participation: 9,10,11,12
2. Ultimate Frisbee (Initially was Vice President of the Club;Helped get a professional team at Stargate; Served as Captain of team; Ran team social media accounts)
Hrs a Week: 5
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
3. Knowledge Bowl(Won 3A State and Regional Tournament all 4 years of high school. Placed 2nd in national tournament all 4 years of high school. Secretary 11-12th grade)
Hrs a Week: 3
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
4. FBLA(Won 1st place in District Website Design Competition. 5th place in Coding and Programming at State competition. Helped Organize and Plan Fundraisers)
Hrs a Week: 3
Weeks per year: 40
Participation: 11,12
5. Volunteer(Organized clothes, sorted clothes for children in need. Organized Resource Center with food, clothes, and supplies for customers in need)
Hrs a Week: 2
Weeks per year: 34
Participation: 9,10,11,12
6. Ran a Blog(Ran Broncos Blog with a friend, Posted content 2 times a week about Denver Broncos, have made over 100 posts, posted 35,000 words)
Hrs a Week: 1.5
Weeks per year: 30
Participation:11,12
7. Job(Worked as Food runner; Ran trays of food to bays in the venue, expedited in kitchen
Hrs a Week: 7
Weeks per year: 42
Participation: 10,11,12
8. Coded Video games( Coded video games with friends in Python and JS. Coded 2 games published online with 500 plays. )
Hrs a Week: 2
Weeks per year: 20
Participation: 11,12
9. Made a Cookbook in my Adroit class in School(Was the team leader and designed and created an cookbook with original recipes as part of a project magament cerifcate.)
Hrs a weel: 4
Weeks per year: 12
grade: 12
Did it in school
10. NHS(Helped Peer Tutor Kids before school in Math, History, and Science; Participated in Fundraisers; Collaborated with other members)
Hrs a Week: 2
Weeks per year: 32
Participation: 10,11,12
This is my activtyies list I just need feedback on how to order this. I think I like the order of top 5 but the last ones Im iffy on.
I think you have a great list of activities! You certainly have leadership, commitment, and have accomplished a lot. My only recommendation would be to put it in the order 1, 2, 3, 4, 7, 5, 9, 8, 10.
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