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College essay

Hi, I'm a senior and I am currently working on my college essay, however, I need help with starting my essay with an interesting hook. I want to write about how k-pop, more specifically BTS and NCT, helped me become more motivated in my school life after being diagnosed with epilepsy right before my Freshman year. I would really appreciate some advice!

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