what is the best way to connect these ideas into essay
- being restricted from going to state in debate for wearing a skirt
- making the debate space safer for women
-going to Girls State and making deep conecttions ot the need for women in politics
-have wanted to go into politics since 2016
-poli sci/ philosophy double major
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I’d choose one scene rather than trying to cover every bullet. Then show what you actually did afterward and how that changed your understanding. Girls State could come later if one specific experience there helped you see the earlier event differently. You can leave your intended majors out unless they add something the story needs.
I’m helping promote EZCollegeApp. Once you have a draft, its AI Essay Coach can respond to a passage you select. A useful question might be: ‘Does this transition explain the connection between these experiences?’ Keep any suggestions that fit your meaning, and rewrite them in your own words.
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