Live Essay Review

Recorded Monday, October 26 at 09:00 PM

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About this livestream

Description

Get your college essay reviewed live during Monday's event.

Yesh Datar will review a select number of essays live during Monday's stream. For each essay, he'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your essay for review, please use the following form.

Your host

Undergrad College: Boston University '20

Major: Medical Science

Graduate College: Boston University School of Medicine

Work Experience: I've been working at CollegeVine for 3 years mentoring students through BS/MD and undergraduate admissions. I am currently a medical student and have done research at Boston Medical Center, Dana-Farber, and the Brigham and Women's Hospital.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Yesh and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
1:16Sofia:How long will the livestream last?
1:42Yael:Would you be able to let us know which essays you are going to review ahead of time so we can see if ours was chosen?
18:35Sofia:How often do you do these review livestreams?
19:03Hiya::Would you be able to let us know which essays you are going to review ahead of time??
30:41Tamilore:How would recommend we balance the technical information with the parts about ourselves in the essay?
31:43Orla:Hi - thank you so much for doing this! If our essay isn't going to be read, will it still be reviewed or should we sign up for the next live essay review available?
32:14William:What about when we talk about a specific professor's research? Can we use some jargon then?
48:47Orla:So sorry to bother you again, I'm not sure if you didn't see my question earlier or if I didn't hear it since my wifi is pretty bad but: If our essay isn't going to be read, will it still be reviewed or should we sign up for the next live essay review available?
61:51Michelle:How can we use the essay tool?
62:39RS:Does the Common App essay change from year to year?
63:17Divyam:Hey yesh, I can't really figure out the transition in the paras 1 and 2 of the first essay. Been stuck on it for months. Could you give me any specific ideas about that ?
72:00Tamilore:What did you write your 650 word essay about?
73:01Samuel:Is there a tool to check grammar errors
73:24Samuel:very common errors?