Live Essay Review

Recorded Thursday, October 29 at 10:00 PM

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About this livestream

Description

Get your college essay reviewed live during Thursday's stream.

Moriah Kofsky will review a select number of essays live during Thursday's event. For each essay, she'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your profile for review, please use the following form

Your host

Undergrad College: University of Pennsylvania '19

Major: English and Women’s Studies

Work Experience: I'm passionate about merging storytelling, psychology, and spirituality to co-create experiences that transform people. In addition to advising students with CollegeVine, I work as a life coach and freelance writer.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Moriah and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
25:17Zainab:Is this the second essay you're reviewing?
70:05Ella:I've heard that UC essays should be more straightforward than creative. Is this a good way to approach the UC essays?