Live Essay Review

Recorded Monday, November 2 at 10:00 PM

The recording will load in a moment.

About this livestream

Description

Get your college essay reviewed live during Monday's event.

Yesh Datar will review a select number of essays live during Monday's stream. For each essay, he'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your essay for review, please use the following form.

Your host

Undergrad College: Boston University '20

Major: Medical Science

Graduate College: Boston University School of Medicine

Work Experience: I've been working at CollegeVine for 3 years mentoring students through BS/MD and undergraduate admissions. I am currently a medical student and have done research at Boston Medical Center, Dana-Farber, and the Brigham and Women's Hospital.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Yesh and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
20:46Jon:Hey Yesh how many essays do you plan to read?
38:30Jon:How much showing is enough showing? When you say show don't tel'
39:33Sophia:Is there any way that I can have a personal meeting with you about my essay?
55:59Jon:I find this essay wholesome and cute. How could the student pack that 480-word emotional narrative in a more compact manner?

Upcoming

Most recent recordings