Live Essay Review

Recorded Tuesday, November 10 at 12:00 AM

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About this livestream


Get your college essay reviewed live during Monday's event.

Yesh Datar will review a select number of essays live during Monday's stream. For each essay, he'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your essay for review, please use the following form.

Your host

Undergrad College: Boston University '20

Major: Medical Science

Graduate College: Boston University School of Medicine

Work Experience: I've been working at CollegeVine for 3 years mentoring students through BS/MD and undergraduate admissions. I am currently a medical student and have done research at Boston Medical Center, Dana-Farber, and the Brigham and Women's Hospital.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Yesh and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
10:53@anonymous:for college essays how do you show your achievements without being overbearing?
28:52@mimi:Can you talk about the 3 anecdotes you mentioned and how they are connected?
65:16@anonymous:Overall, I should work on adding more of my feelings to the essay?
66:46@anonymous:Do you think I ended my essay in a good way or should I add more to it?
69:07@anonymous:Should I move the last sentence to where I was explaining the meaning of my name?
69:26@anonymous:If our essays were not reviewed will we still receive feedback?
70:16@anonymous:And then just end my conclusion without the last sentence?


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