Live Essay Review

Recorded Monday, November 23 at 11:00 PM

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About this livestream


Get your college essay reviewed live during Monday's event.

Moriah Kofsky will review a select number of essays live during Monday's stream. For each essay, she'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your essay for review, please use the following form.

Your host

Undergrad College: University of Pennsylvania '19

Major: English and Women’s Studies

Work Experience: I'm passionate about merging storytelling, psychology, and spirituality to co-create experiences that transform people. In addition to advising students with CollegeVine, I work as a life coach and freelance writer.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Moriah and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
29:51@anonymous:what is the best way to put in context and scenery with a small word limit?
33:21@anonymous:In terms of readability, how difficult/easy to read should my essay be?
64:03@ajnwakuche:I was referencing to my mom chemically treating my hair while I was sleeping
64:11@ke1012:What do you think of the last sentence because I thought it was powerful? Should essays end like that?


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