Live Essay Review

Recorded Tuesday, December 29 at 06:00 PM

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About this livestream


Get your college essay reviewed live during Tuesday's event.

Moriah Kofsky will review a select number of essays live during Tuesday's stream. For each essay, she'll walk through how admissions officers would read the essay, then go paragraph by paragraph to offer suggestions for improvement.

To submit your essay for review, please use the following form.

Your host

Undergrad College: University of Pennsylvania '19

Major: English and Women’s Studies

Work Experience: I'm passionate about merging storytelling, psychology, and spirituality to co-create experiences that transform people. In addition to advising students with CollegeVine, I work as a life coach and freelance writer.

Audience questions

These are questions from the audience that we had time to answer during the live session. If you have any other questions, you can request an answer from Moriah and other CollegeVine experts in an upcoming livestream or on the Q&A Forum anytime.
67:58@ashleyb03:Are we allowed to use contractions in our college essays?
68:32@Scaredy_cat:Not a question but, I think it does not properly showcase her motivations and why b&n is relevant to that


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